I'm very impressed with everything you've done so far.

Can't wait for more!

I like the insights in Alduins POV, the interaction, the humour. Although you update slowly, you give a lot of thought to your chapters, and that shows. Quality is alway better than quantity.

Dragonrend has become one of the few stories I keep checking daily for new chapters.

It's intriguing.

Earlier though, when "Aldin" had to use the toilet, in my opinion a chamber pot in easy reach under the bed would have been more likely than a lengthy walk to the facilities (which would surely resemble a hole in the ground and a plank with a hole in it to sit on). But that's a minor detail, who am I to philosophize about the way of loo in Skyrim

By the eight, it's glorious. I rather like the human!Alduin, he's very amusing... I love how he's so ready to kill Freyja but so dependent on her, and how he was proud of himself for fishing successfully. :3

Very cute. More.

Wow, thats really tragic that she did that! Well, I CAN'T WAIT TLL THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Ok, review time!

I am officially addicted to this fic. It is always a joy to find well written stories like yours.

I hope you will put another chapter soon.

Gotta stop giggling... It's amazing!

I'm a new reader, and I'd like to say that I really like this story so far. It's different, in a good way of course. I just love it. Truthfully, I've read these three chapters twice so far. I just love it.

I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter. C:

I have to say this fanfic is really drawing me in and its certainly making me laugh! And yay for another Brit writer on here :).

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Funny chapter, especially when Alduin was leering at her ass, really cracked me up.

I stalked fanfiction for DAYS waiting for you to update! This is just getting better and better!

There's so much that I liked about this chapter - I could go on a rant - but, as to not spoil anything for the curious reader, I'll keep my mouth closed :)

Please update again as soon as you can! I'll be happily roaming around the Skyrim section as I wait. x)

This is just brilliant. It's like he's trying to make her uncomfortable, as if it's the only way he can get her back. Wonderful.

gotta feel sorry for alduin, sick twisted evil bastard that he is.

Alright, I saw this story after the summery caught my eye, followed by the number of reviews with only three chapters. Well after reading it all I thought to myself, where is the next chapter?

The detail you have put in this story is amazing! One of the best I have seen. And the plot...well besides being original, it's just...awesome!

It is so awesome in fact that I may not be able to wait for the next chapter to be updated before I...you know what? Don't mind me, I'll be fine.

I did not really know what to expect from this story but I decided to give it a shot anyway, and let me just say: wow! This is truly fantastic writing and the story line has a lot of potential. Keep up the great work!

More on Alduin's PoV please!