I have very little to say about this, very little bad things that is.

It's well written, i didn't see any grammar issues, not that i'm all that good at telling, and you used your words very well.

Cannot wait for more.

I have to say this is a really original idea, I hope to see more chapter soon.

This looks intersting to read. I was impressed with the plot and i would lile to see more.

I'm totally subscribing to this story! I've looked for this everywhere and I'm delighted to find someone writing it. I'm not big on first-person stories in general, but I'll make an exception. Good work so far!

Haha, poor Alduin! I'd have passed out from the shock too.

Freyja's initial disbelief about the found man's identity is funny. She's such a nice person to take pity on the poor dov-turned-jul! Can't wait to read what happens next.

already love the story! very good writing, very interesting. Hope you update soon

I really like how this is going! I can't wait to see what happens next this is really good

i like where the story is going, please write more, i can't wait!

whoa this story is so cool please continue 3