Reviews for Little Black Lies
Speklez chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Well now... that was certainly fun, that naughty Jasper. The originality of Caius being a hybrid and twins with Athenodora was a nice new idea. Oh... how the mind whirls... :D.
Deviouslytwisted chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
That is really goood! Keep writing
Jalice223 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Good story, I would like 2 read more.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
guau
casper22 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I don't know what your plans are for this story, whether it's just a one-shot or something more but i would whole heartedly encourage you to continue this.
I think a Caius/Bella/Jasper relationship would be amazing, plus the hybrid detail and Bella coming into her own could be the makings of a great story unlike anything i have ever read before here on
I'm very interested in seeing where this goes
Amazing writing!
JackSkellington'sBride chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I was showed this story by Bella Macleod. I love it I never thought of this side of Jasper or Cauis it leaves me with more ideas for the people I help. I love it and hope for more
4MeJasper chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Great to see a new story!

This feels like a one-shot overall to me, but the last line makes me wonder if there will be more.

And you found a way to make Caius more vicious! Whoo-hoo! Nice touch with making Atendora his sister.

I LOVED the surprise of JASPER showing up! I love Jasper wherever he shows up, but a surprise appearance is just that much nicer.

Bravo!
Gabby0515 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Interesting! And, wow, wasn't expecting the slash there lol
Angel chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Well,

Are you going to update CAUSE this story is AWESOME!

I NEED more. I think it would be interesting if

Jasper/Caius/Bella where together at some point in the story. Update sooooooooooooooon. ;)
cici love chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
gahhhhhhhhhh soooooo diffffff love it
fallgoddess chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Damn can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon
MoonlitSnowFox chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Wow. Jasper and Caius. And all three hybrids (though I have no idea what that means, yet). Intriguing beginning - hooked.
edwar4dlover84 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Wow that is the second time reading this and I am dying for more

*Jen*
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
wow this was very different and i enjoyed reading this this was a awesome chapter some how Bella knew she belonged to someone else and not to Edward and told Alice that she will be safe i guess she didn't know about the the half and half vampire and werewolf in Caius like i said i really enjoyed this chapter until next time have a good week
Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
this is really good hope there is more soon cannot wait
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