Reviews for The Neverending Story
fleeting . white . feathers chapter 8 . 4/13/2012
It was a bit too fast, and needed more description and mystery. The plot was interesting enough, but the writing needs to step up. Hope that helps. :)
SilverRingasaMemory chapter 5 . 2/28/2012
aawww.. i love these characters~! You've included all my favorite! 8D Please continue *bows*