Reviews for Time Bomb
Glenshadow9 chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
YES absolutely. This is how Vocaloids should be used. o,b!
It's nice to have a happy ending for once - considering Len dies so often. I was honestly thinking, "oh damn he's going to die another miserable death" at the start, so I was really glad I read the whole story when I reached the ending.
MadamDork94 chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
So sad but great
I don't see much of these stories but glad i came across this
Nice job
Queen48 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I feel bad for Rin! NO girl deserves that from her father!
This account is very dead chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
wow ok this is actually really really really good
AbominableToast chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Wow,this is so raw.

It's absolutely beautiful. c':
smilk chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Argh! Angst! It got into my eye! Your last one, Orange, was also, so awesome angsty. So angsty, that my heart couldn't take it and started taking drugs. It's all your fault! ALL YOUR FAULT! I like angst too, BUT WOULD IT HURT TO WRITE FLUFF ONCE IN A WHILE?
thegreatninjaprocrastinator chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Awww. This has a bittersweet feel to it. I'm really happy with what happened at the end.

The fact that they didn't get all stupid and emo (you know committing suicide and all that shit) made it even better.

JayJay223 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I really really love this story. From the way it's written to its great little
Demolition Panda chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
That...was...almost heart shattering. T_T Then again, I'm dramatic and sensitive, but it was still good. Good, nice happy ending, though.

I liked it. Good work!