Reviews for From Fiction To Real Life
Guest chapter 7 . 11/11/2012
I think the idea behind this story is interesting enough, but when I started reading I was expecting a story about Yamamoto and Gokudera. Being down to chapter 7, most of the screen-time has been given to your self-insert twins, with Yamamoto and Gokudera's relationship mostly in the sidelines. You're free to write the story of whatever self-insert OC character you wish, but if you're selling the story as YamaGoku centric then don't make it OC-centric, it's incredibly annoying and makes for a boring read
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 10 . 11/4/2012
WTF? You seriously trolled me at in end. XDD
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
Ohh, sweet and cuddle
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
OH wow. That's some real hard shit you got there in the Omake. O_O Anyways, your story is seriously very interesting. The most awesome AU i've ever read! XD
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 5 . 11/4/2012
Nice backstory! XD
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
Oh my Gawd, this is so AU. ._.
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
OH gawd, you are psychic! XDD
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
LOL. This story is awesome! It's very interesting and at the same time humorous I look forward in reading more! :D
Latui chapter 5 . 5/13/2012
Yesss, question answered! Okay, they make a bit more sense now _ It is a bit er, how'd you say it- "over the top"-but in a really fun way; and you're right, it's KHR. It's not Reborn if it's not at least a ton larger than life, lol. I wasn't expecting Mafioso, that's for sure. Fun chapter, I'm excited to see what's next!
Latui chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
This is a fun take on the series and the 8059 dynamic! I rather like that Tsuna knew the whole time what was up, but it was kinda surprising that Gokudera wasn't more surprised about his knowledge. Did he know the Tsuna was involved already then?

Also, the bit about the Varia mess being a test, hahaha. "Cousin Xanxus"-now I want to see the dynamic between Tsuna and Xansus in this AU.

I'm very interested in dear Sensei and his sister. What is this "assessment" you speak of? *curious*

Looking forward to the next chapter!
StuckOnIdeas4PenNames chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
Update soon please! Can't wait to see how their relationship develops!
MeiSongbird chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
wow it is really good! im a total goku fan so when yama was describing the characters i was like chanting in my head "its goku! its goku! its goku! YOU IDIOT WHY DONT YOU SEE ITS GOKU! IT BETTER BE GOKU!" and then i read the rest of the chapter and realized they hadnt met yet *face palm* lol anywho i love the scene where they meet. great first chapter w
xXZeruto LoverXx chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Keep updating! I'm so curious on what will happen next c:
AoFantasist chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I really like the story idea. It's great so far! :D Excited for the next chapter~
Yeshterday chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
When I read the ... Well what ever it's called I thought it was going to be sad and depressing. Thankfully its not.

I Like this chapter.

Well done. Well written.

Please continue updating.