Reviews for Shakugan no Shana: Eternal Legacy
Fourth Wave chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Wonderful chapter... The 'world' you created in this last series is brilliant... I can't even think of such a great world. It's also an interesting concept that Yukari Sakai is...a copy (?) of Yukari Hirai. I take it that you were inspired by SnS III's final episode that Shana let go of the Hirai Torch XD

I also have a feeling that Kotaro and Yukari will be the main hero and heroines from now on :

At any rate, brilliant job. You know, today I actually came to to say to you that your previous fictions (particularly the SoF arc) did the job much much better than the original SnS. The original SnS III had a dumb plot. Dumb logic. While yours, in the other hand, was brilliant and left no loose ends nor plotholes (and the logic made sense too, unlike the original SnS III). Then as I were about to PM you for the above salute, I saw that you finally posted a new series! Great!

Please continue your brilliance.

You might have a lot of other reviewers, but please keep this one review of mine in your mind: To me, the "true" SnS final season was your fanfiction, not the real SnS III.
Sekai -The World chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Great chapter! This chapter showed a little insight about how are you going to continue the story, hope to see more of Yukari in future chapters
Krawling Khaos chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Well, as I promised, I am going to review this story... or at least what's going on so far in it...

So far, the idea of doing this switch between "Memory" and "Retrace" idea is a neat little feature, so I hope it actually will flow well with the future of the story.

As for the idea of "bringing back" Yukari as Shana and Yuji's child was a smart idea, as it allows for an interesting dynamic between the past and present. Though the conclusion the she has the Reiji Maigo AND a part of the Flame of Heaven is rather ridiculous. I can believe that she is half existing being, since her father is a Mystes, and her mother is a Flame Haze... but the way it's lined up feels kinda off to me. I'm fine with her not seeing her parents at all, or Hecate for that matter. But having Ike basically state that she possesses the Reiji Maigo is just something that bugs me.

The way I see it, Yuji and Shana are dead or something, or hiding inside of their daughter's Flame... something on those lines. I'm personally not looking forward to a reveal like that, as predictability is something that weakens a good story.

Other then that, I have really nothing to say. I don't like to delve to how I feel ALL of the main characters are portrayed UNTIL I see a lot more development. It feels more fair of me do conduct a character analysis in that situation. Keep up the good work.
Sacchin chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Thanks for the update! :D I wonder what happened to Shana and Yuji! I'm so excited! :D Please update soon!
ColinatorGX chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Dayum Yuji, why you gotta be such a sneaky, glorious schemer? :P

So Yukari has the Reiji Maigo, AND the Crimson Flame of Alastor. Uh-huh. That's certainly something to think about.

But what it means, well, for one it means Yuji doesn't have the Reiji Maigo. Then again, he's so much more like a Crimson Lord than a Mystes now (incluiding his ridiculous capacity) that he wouldn't run out that easily. Especially if he took Midnight Cores along when he vanished.

Also, Kotaro is flustered already? HAHAHAHA, he sounds so easy to tease!

Looking forward for more!
The Chimp Pit chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Really interesting chapter. A few surprises here and there but I'd already had a feeling that they were coming.

Really enjoying your story right now man, keep up to good work!


( P.S. Umm, how did Kazumi Die? Sorry for asking it's just it's been a while since I read the second part of your story and Iv'e forgotten the details. Thx )
Sekai -The World chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
The Snake of the Festival granted my wish of having another series to the Eternal come true! This is definitely something worth wishing towards the Snake of Festival for.

I wondered who will be main character of this series, will it still be Yuji, or his daughter Yukari or the most mysterious person here Kannagi. Well no matter who the main character is, this story is bound to be great!

I guess I should reread the entire Eternal Saga again. It has been almost one year since I last read it I think.
CapoExecutor chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
Great chapter. Good to see that Ike has the gist of the Crimson Realm's history of events. Hmm... between him and Keisaku, I can't help but think that there might be a bit of competition on who's the fastest draw...

Even if Dantalion is dead in canon, at least I can hope of seeing more of him here.

Anyways, looking forward to the next one
ColinatorGX chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Y'know, the way they're using to store power of existance in order to feed the Denizens and Lords is actually quite smart. Still, isn't it a risk to have so much stored power of existance? Well, I'm sure they have some plans for that.

More flashback chapters to expand on the time-skip are always good, and this one was fairly enjoyable. Looking forward for more, as always.

Also, Ike carries a D'Eagle? TOTALLY BADASS.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Cool chapter... I haven't really noticed any characters from SnS Final... I'll re-read this chapter when I have time XD.
Fire Lord 626 chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Great great chapter, Mr John. Still, they are gone, aren't they. As in, they are somewhere around the World?
Sacchin chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Thank you for the update! :D That was really well-written! :D Please continue to update! :D
BsofBordeaux chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
woah! never expected to have the Trinity missing in chapter 2. The others may have already said it but please let me do so... some more details on the new surroundings to be seen in Misaki City.

The three worlds living in peace and the hot teacher really reminded me of what happened in "Shuffle!, though that scene might really be the usual outcome if three worlds collided.

I'm also pretty sure that their disappearance was caused by Keisaku's father and the men-from-the-dead-that-gives-me-the-akatsuki-feeling group, and I believe that the magnitude of what happened to them was really high. Taking note that Wilhemina was also missing from the picture.

I'm really excited to read the honeymoon chapter, in a way that the story could be still read with the "T" rating. Ever thought of doing that chapter with the setting from one of the beautiful places in the Philippines, like in, El Nido, Palawan?

pay ang galing mo magsulat! keep it up! :)

I'm excited to read the later chapters :)
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
Reading this chapter while listening to simple and clean (Kingdom Hearts ending) bad idea. Makes me sad poor Yukari, she grew up without her parents T.T What happened to them anyway and Hecate? are they alright?
ColinatorGX chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
Yukari... why you such a good girl! T-T



No, really, I seriously wanna know what the hell is up here. I can only assume that in this 16 year span some major incident happened that revealed the existance of the Crimson and etc to the world at large. Which is also somehow related to the True Trinity going missing. I'd like more elaboration on that!

Other things to say: those small, yet meaningful changes to Shana and Hecate's personalities were a nice touch to add, and I'm glad you implemented characters like Sophie and Rebecca! I bet SnS Final really threw a wrench in yer plans, eh? XD

Otherwise, great work so far. Your style is still simple to follow, yet still seems to have that smooth, classy feel. Even if it sounds a bit rusty for me. Or maybe that's because I haven't read your stories in a while? Whatever.

I'm really pumped up for this!

And calling it now - Sabrac will enter a contract with Yukari. And no, I'm not just saying this because I love his character. Not at all.

Well, maybe a little.


Cheers for finally starting this!
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