|Reviews for First Days and Nights|
| SP777 chapter 1 . 1/8
Good idea for a story. Very nice.
| xmxoxoxnxy chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Are you going to continue? If so, please update soon! If not, very well written
| Mara Wolfe chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Well done! I can easily believe you were involved in the making of LadyHawke!
| trouble97018 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Just ran across your fic about Ladyhawke. The movie is one of my all time favorites and your fic is going into my all time favorite category too. It was wonderful! I really liked the way you showed how they reacted to the first days of the curse. Thank you!
| Syntinen Laulu chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I like this. A *lot*. I'm a bit confused as how he's now back being Captain of the Guard as normal when surely the last thing that hapened was the lovers fleeing while the Guard chased them? But I really don't mind as I so much enjoyed the way you imagined the sensation of changing and his gradual discovery.
Two tiny things you might consider correcting:
- when you said 'He can not see any tresses to denote the owner' I think you meant 'jesses'. That's what the straps on a hawk's legs are called.
- Generally a medieval lady would be referred to by name as 'Alienor (or whatever her given name is) d'Angouleme', rather than 'the Lady d'Angoulême'. That just struck me as very slightly off.
But overall, big-time congratulations - and thanks!