|Reviews for Adam & Eve|
| cloudnine chapter 8 . 2/23
Omg vvery emotional chapter absolutely loved it. That poor flabanero...I felt for him...but serah b HAS to save my noel...I LOVE this story! Exactly what I love to read as continuatiom. Cant wait for Echo!
| LilithLieLoveHeart chapter 8 . 2/16
Oh goddess why? I can't wait for your next chapter...I'm crying right now...
| Deiru Tamashi chapter 8 . 2/14
I found this story by accident, and I do not regret it. Wonderful work, and I do so ever hope to see more. Great job.
| Dragoon Dave chapter 8 . 2/9
Serah's kind of a bad ass here! This chapter was a pretty great way to show how she's evolved during her journey. The ending was a nice refreshing piece, considering the rest of the chapter was heartwrenching and terrifying (that poor, poor flan...)
Excellent job! Can't wait to see what's coming next!
| Conan-Ai chapter 8 . 2/9
yayyyyy an update XDD
| diellemabelle chapter 8 . 2/5
Great chapter, very twisty. It made me sad that Serah had to attack the flan, I was hoping that she could talk some sense into him or exchange a kiss for the leaf or something like that. And then when she finds Noel he's all full of holes! What good is the antidote now?! Jeez.
Hmm another arc, you say? Very interesting. Hopefully there are many chapters to come!
Thanks for writing XD
| XxJewelxX chapter 8 . 2/5
I told myself that I wasn't going to read any fanfics until spring break and as soon as I got the notification that this updated, what do I do? Go completely against my plan and read it. OMG! You have me at the edge of my seat just waiting to see what happens next. It's so obvious that Serah has feelings for Noel...why can't she see that already?! If only the actual game was like this, I'd be the happiest person alive.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/4
That chapter had me hooked in from the start, anticipating the outcome of Noels health. I've got to admit that chapter was well writte. Looking forward to the next chapter :D
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/4
I hope you are ok. I just wanted to let you know that this story is truly something special and you inspire me to become a better writer. The way you build up this story seems so effortless it has a flow to it and the characters are very real. The whole thing with Noel was heart wrenching but that's why I enjoy reading this. The scene with the flan wad disturbing but I did feel just a tiny bit bad for it but mostly I was creeped out.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!:)
| Sweet.Crazy-DramaQueen chapter 8 . 2/4
Amazing work as always! I don't review enough and I wager I should have done so more often. My pardons, my lady.
I hope everything will be okay with the two of them because things look seriously dreary. The flan scene freaked my out the most than any of the Lady Serpentress scenes. That flan is just wrong, so wrong.
Anyway, it's some awesome work right here! I'm still begging you for a Noel pov chapter and a little bit few more description of his sexy little body- hehe
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/3
So glad you updated! :-)
| QUF chapter 8 . 2/3
Thank you for your efforts of creating this highly enjoyable story. I know how hard it is to work up the inspiration and will to write a story; sometimes (to me) it's hard to even reach a mere 1000 words. haha. :p
I wish you more strength to face any hardships in your life now. Be very sure that at least one person is really grateful for everything you've done by creating this story. This journey you take me through your story is a very enjoyable one indeed. :)
Be strong! Never give up! (Noel, Serah, and Mog chorused in the background). :D
| Desertdawn101 chapter 8 . 2/3
Omg datt is such a cliffhanger!
But they just have to survive like come on its Noel and serah!
I hope u update soon da suspense is killer!
| The Clawed Butterfly chapter 8 . 2/3
oh dear.. I'm fairly certain they will survive but I'm dying to know how!
| blackblood13ful chapter 8 . 2/3
woooooow this was heart-wrenching, I hope you are okay :( I don't know who im more worried about serah, noel, or you!