Hahaha, such a funny story, loved it!

Ahh what a sweet story! Pipit and Karane are adorbs and need more love on here! I like the way you left off right before the wing ceremony and all the other junk that followed, making this like a mini-prequel. Groose just needs to stop. Everything. I semi-wished he could have just gotten lost forever and disappeared mysteriously when he first went down to the surface. Loved the story! ouo

Well someone beat me to it! Haha.

Get some more toilet paper? Is that a NintendoCapriSun reference I see!?

My money's on Zelda. Link is a dead man.

I like how this flowed in with the actual beginning of SS. And that you like NCS. I was just watching Conker's.
You should totally make a fanfic of CBFD! that would be so fun to read IN THE BATHROOM!

"Get some more toilet paper!"
Do you watch NintendoCapriSun too?

lol, this is pretty funny! keep up the good work!

oh yes Link ten o'clock is such an unreasonably early time to wake up, I have to get up at 5:15 every morning so I don't think that's too bad. besides, you have to meet Zelda before evil Girlyhim takes her away!

this story is hilarious so far! _ keep up the good work!

Absolutely amazing story!

I’ve been in a one-shot sort of mood when it comes to what I’m looking for in a fanfic lately, but I am ever so glad that I decided to keep reading! The fact that you were able to juggle the ZeLink pairing as well as Pipit’s and Karane’s without making the story choppy was an excellent element and every bit of embellishment you added was perfect. I don’t think you could have done anything to make a better fanfic!

This is tremendously well-written and I commend you on a job well done!

Also, I love the references to NintendoCapriSun and Rainbow Dash that you added in(:

Signed,

CalistaCousland

Ah, indeed. I was still getting the hang of the flight controls and wasted ten minutes catching that damn yellow bird...Groose and his cronies throwing random junk did not help at all. *shakes head*

A very enjoyable story, all told. Thank you for sharing.

I thought it would go all the way to the ceremony, but this is just great in any form. It was a good story, and to tell the truth, I was motivated for every update. The 'cliffhangers' weren't unbearable and Im glad you didn't make us wait long, yet gave yourself time to write well. So anyway, thank you for the great read and Ill be sure to check out anything else you have to write!

Nice job! I love the prequel you made to the story! I t goes write into the game perfectly and fills in all those little details about Link and zelda's possible relationship

Awww... that was so cute. I think your Zelda was spot on and adorable.

When you say on monday, do you mean tommorow or next week?