Reviews for Love Over Marriage
Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Andromeda was certainly interesting in this… seemed a little crazy. Nice job!
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Believability: 3.5/5. This could have fit easily into the Black sisters' lives, especially since purebloods interbreed. However, I'm not totally sure about this; Andromeda would probably have started a romance with Ted around this time.

Characterization: 3.5/5. I think Bellatrix was spot-on "Merlin, Mother, she'll rip him limb from limb" as Andromeda said; I can definitely picture the other Black girls thinking that about Bellatrix and Rodolphus. I'm not completely sure about Narcissa and Andromeda, however; I think Narcissa is a bit prouder and would understand the prospect of pureblood arranged marriages.

Spelling/Grammar: 5/5. I didn't spot a single mistake when it comes to that.

Enjoyment: 3/5. I'm not usually the biggest fan of siblingcest, but I think you handled this pretty well. Good job.

General Comments: I really liked your portrayal of Bellatrix, even though she was not the focus of the fic; I think you handled her extremely well and captured her pre-Azkaban personality quite well.

Your Score: 15/20.