|Reviews for Beyond Death|
| Colby's girl chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Absolutely loved the story. Well written, Interesting lore and story line. I liked the parallele between the Winchester brothers and the Halverson's. Great job. Cheers!
| Jane88 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Fabulous! SPN craving's still strong but I'm feeling much better now. :) Loved it, the idea and the twist in the middle of the story was great. Exciting till the end, enjoyed it! Thanks!
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
What a cool mystery! I couldn't imagine how the hunt and the attack on Sam were connected, but you tied it together so well. I especially love that the "villain" didn't even want to be doing what he was doing. And as always, of course, lovely brother stuff. Great reading.
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Zombies. How awesome is that? Enjoyed this very much.
| brynerose chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
thanks for sharing; I really enjoyed reading this!
On a nitpicky note (just as a writer), there were a couple gramatical bits I stumbled over, so you might want to check it over and re-post a corrected version. But I'm also reading this at 1:30 in the morning. It could be me! Anyway, thanks again!
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
What a wonderful story!
I've read it a couple of times already.
When it first started I couldn't figure out why Sam was dreaming about the monster and then was attacked by it, but you explained it all by the end.
I like how you started the show in the future and then moved it back 15 hours, just like they would on the show.
It was so much fun to read just a Dean and Sam MOTW story. They are hard to find on this site now as the stories seem to ignore Dean and Sam, the brothers that started all of this for us to enjoy.
You did a great job writing the brothers and their voices. I also love the mystery you created for the Winchesters to solve.
I felt so sorry for Sam when he was attacked. I could just imagine how worried Dean was when he arrived at the ER and saw his little brother.
I wasn't sure about Dean's act towards Grant that he was the one that beat up Sam, though Sam played along and it did get Grant talking.
I had to smile when the brothers told Grant to sit at the same time. 'The brothers issued the command in stereo.'
This line from Dean I could see being true. "They desecrated his grave and big brother came back as one of these… draugr to protect his family, to avenge Jake's death." Dean looked at Grant in disgust. "I can relate..." Thanks for also explaining why Jens attacked Sam in the alley.
You did a wonderful job with the fight scene between Jens and Dean. I was surpirsed when Jens asked asked Dean to end it all. I wasn't expecting him to speak.
Nice moment at the end with the brothers relaxing in the motel room while Sam healed. I also like how Dean was taking care of his little brother.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
I enjoyed reading it. :)
| jeanne chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I thought the story was very entertaining.
| zekeschance chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
You did a great job with all of your research that made it into such an entertaining story. Thoroughly enjoyed the plot and humor. Thanks!
| Samantha V chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Loved it! You've got the boy's voices down perfectly. The banter is great, fabulous protective Dean, and awesome h/c.
| scootersmom chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Thanks for such a great story! I really enjoyed this back to the hunt story! You write the brothers so well and the lore you used was fascinating.
| Taeriel chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Excellent story! I enjoyed reading it.
| calcium77 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Thanks! This was a great story! Loved reading it! "catnip for the cougar set" made me laugh out loud :-D
I just moved last week and reading this story is literally the first fun thing I have done in weeks! I can't thank you enough ! Love how you write sam and dean! So perfect!
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Dean lied. He's totally Sammy's mama. I liked the dead soldier thinking that to rise as a revenant instead of moving on to see his famiy is a curse. It kinda would be. It was good to see the bully confess so that the truth came out at last.
| detroiter stranded in tucson chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
...CASE FIC !... Thank you sooo much!..and Thank you for sharing your story telling talents...k
| Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Are you ready for a long review? Well are you? Cause I have TONS to say about this story!
I loved it! S7 has been SO heavy in the angst that I am almost aching for some H/C in the show instead of seconds(and thirds, and fourths, etc, etc) of hurt.
I think one of my very favorite aspects of Dean is uber-protective Dean! I'm an older sister and while I have never had to protect my little sister from ghosts and zombies I totally relate to the urge to kick in the teeth of the people who hurt her.
It was SO well fleshed out! Read completely and totally like an episode and you know these characters so very well that I swear I can hear Jared and Jensen saying these lines.
I loved it! Have I said that already? Cause I do! It was the perfect fic to tide us starved SPN fans over until the 16th (really WTH!) and it's always a joy to read something that is fun and well thought out. Thank you so much for writing it! When I get time I'm going to read all of your stories (cause they NEVER disappoint)
Dean scratched his cheek. "Not clowns?"
"Oh." Dean's eyes slid closed. "Then keep it down. Beat-up hunter trying to sleep over here." He punched up his pillow, turned away from Sam and if the steady rhythm of his breathing was any indication, was back to sleep in seconds.- BWAHAHAHAAH! LOVE THIS!
"Meet the last guy who pissed me off. And most of the time, I like him." Dean clapped a hand on Grant's shoulder and steered him to the table by the window, shoving him down into a chair. He winked at Sam once his back was to Grant. "How you doing, Sammy?"
"I'll live." Sam fought to keep a straight face. "No thanks to you."- PERFECT!
Dean's eyebrow quirked. "A cat? Like a kitty-cat, or a, you know, a manly lion…cat."
He got a classic bitchface for that one.- Please, PLEASE start writing for the show pronto.
Dude." Sam weakly swatted Dean. "She was like Mom's age."
"And you, my brother, are catnip to the cougar set." Dean shrugged at Sam's bitchface. "I know – I can't figure it out either."
Sam hissed as he tried to push himself up.
"Whoa, whoa…" Dean placed a gentle hand on Sam's chest to stop him. "You're gonna need my help to get vertical." He scrambled to his feet, then hooked his arms under Sam's. "You know the drill – exhale and push up on three. Two…three."
Sam couldn't stifle a yell, but he was up and standing beside his brother, breathing the short, shallow breaths that tormented his injured ribs the least. He nodded his thanks to Dean, his expression darkening when he got his first good look at his brother. "Your face."
Dean grinned, his arm still around Sam's back until he was sure his brother was steady. "Handsome, I know."- I miss this. I miss them leaning on each other, I miss the bickering, I miss the support and love spoken only through panicked yells, I just...miss this.
Dean exhaled slowly, adjusted his stance, and swung the axe.- This was very evocative for some reason. I felt really bad for Jens, but it was awesome that he chose for it to end this way. GREAT JOB!
Sam exhaled loudly in mock annoyance. "Please tell me you're not gonna mother me until my ribs knit."
"I do not mother, Sam." Dean scowled as he sat on the end of his brother's bed, shuffled the cards and dealt two hands. "The only time that word applies to me is when bad guys use it, and then it has whole different meaning. Now shut up and play."- FANTASTIC. I can SEE the credits rolling in my head. Thank you so much for this and please don't EVER stop writing! :D