Reviews for If Ethan Was Smarter
Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2014
I agree with the below comment.

He would have saved them earlier but then they would just get killed again by irving...

Also kori never got saved lol

You should continue this alternet universe! :D
Martial Arts Master chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
That's a great ending, but I think there's a problem here:

Ethan's parents getting trapped in a fire was just a symptom, not the cause of all the trouble. They were lured there in the first place because Irving was trying to get revenge on them for his mother.

So if Ethan never meets Irving or Jack, how is anyone going to solve the whole "Irving's mother's accident" fiasco, and what's to stop Irving from simply trying a new revenge plan?
Kl chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Hold up. I remember you playing this on YouTube, argle, and Ethan's parents saved Kori, which lead to Jack trying to destroy Ethan's parents' lives. He would have to have saved Kori the right way to stop all of this from happening. Jack would still be mad if Ethan's parents live, and would still create havoc for the Karios.
darkdoll25 chapter 2 . 3/2/2012
It's true. If Ethan was smarter, he would've noticed so many girls liked him xD