Reviews for The Shattered One
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
The funny thing is, I think there's a little town in Switzerland called Castiel.
Becky-RosenMe chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I agree with you in hating mpreg i only like the ones where deans an alpha and cas is an omega. I hate it when no one knows its possible and when deans or anyone else is mpreg
SakiXX1 chapter 33 . 12/19/2013
I love this story! I love how you kept all the characters as they would in the canon. The parts they say and do sounds exactly like how they would on screen! I also like this new plot twist and how adorable Daniel is! Thank you for such a great story!
Meiyo no Ko chapter 33 . 12/18/2013
Gah. That ending was just-just fan-TASTIC, and oh, by the way, congratulations on writing the only mpreg fic I will ever read.

You rock.
UnDeanifiedMadness chapter 33 . 12/12/2013
I loved the story and the plot. I dunno why you find it "yicky" to read or write Mpreg as it can actually happen. Part of being an Author and reader is having an open mind and being accepting to things that may or may not be deemed normal by society. Woops sorry about the rant lol, but you did a really good job on this story, thank you for writing it.
SimplyHope chapter 33 . 11/24/2013

Simply put, this was absolutely brilliant. You took the whole mpreg storyline, which does tend to turn into a slightly disturbing mess, and made it into a work of art. You have so much talent and a way with words that's just magic. I abolutely adored the way you wrote Cas and Dean's relationship and the gradual progression of Castiel's relationship with Daniel. Also, the way you ended up ending the Apocalypse and tying up the story was just perfection.

Thank you for writing this. It was an honor to be able to read such an extraordinary piece of writing. Well-done.
greenwise chapter 33 . 11/24/2013
great job.
Heart of Diamond chapter 33 . 11/24/2013
Yep, I'm totally ok with that ending too Dean.

That was just beautiful. Seriously beautiful. Like you, I had strayed towards one or two mpregs a few years ago and went NONONONONONONO, but with this story, curiosity got the better of me. And i don't regret it.

Fly On...

Heart of Diamond
pavius chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Man, this is AMAZING! My mpreg fails in comparison to yours... YOU ARE AMAZING!
Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer chapter 33 . 11/8/2013
Thank you for writing this story. I read it over the past few days, and it was an absolute joy! I love everyone's relationships and interactions! And Dean, Cas, and Daniel are so great!
Bench Monkey chapter 33 . 10/31/2013
I have seen this story favourited by so many people, but I've always had my kneejerk reaction to mpreg and not clicked the link... even though I have trawled through everything else you've written in the past.

So, in a moment of supreme boredom (with a healthy dose of procrastination thrown in), I clicked on it last night.

I can honestly say this is the first time I've looked at any kind of mpreg and haven't cringed at all, let alone to the extent of ditching the story; on top of that, this is also one of the very few times where there's a baby introduced into the fold and they don't suddenly turn into a bunch of OOC prats.

Good job!
AllieOfGreenGables chapter 33 . 10/28/2013
Aww. So cute.
AllieOfGreenGables chapter 24 . 10/28/2013
I'd bitch about how terrible it it that the baby doesn't have on ear protection for its delicate ears near a gun, but considering that said baby can take out windows with his screams and his ears are still okay from that, I think he'll be all right.
Talimancer chapter 33 . 10/24/2013
Sheeeit son, good fic good fic
PiePrincess-andthe-FallenAngel chapter 33 . 10/14/2013
I have the same feelings about mpreg fictions and was reluctant to read this but found my self really enjoying it. Thanyou for this fic
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