Reviews for The Shattered One
Black Fungus chapter 3 . 3/7/2019
So , I know you are done with this story but I am new sooo. I have had a kid and it is symbiotic, we both got some things out of it. Parasitic is when One gets everything and the other(Cass) gets hurt. Man I hope that is not how baby angles are. Commensalism is one party benefits , one is not hurt or helped. Sorry it is just my roommate said my baby was a parasitic and I had to fix that idea! I also moved out! I wish Cass would just tell them!
Black Fungus chapter 2 . 3/7/2019
Eat that burger Cass! I like their shakes.
Black Fungus chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
I do not like dudes having baby's. but you don't and wrote one so I am going to read it! I like this so far!
Thefortunateone chapter 33 . 2/9/2019
I legit teared up! The characters were so good! I really enjoyed Gabriel! And I loved how Cass managed to even shake Micheal s faith! So good! N the ending was so fricking sweet I had to put my phone down and grin like an idiot before adding to my favourites!
WaywardDaughter617 chapter 33 . 1/25/2019
A fic that’s *technically* Mpreg and I loved it? Whaaaa?

Seriously though, this is brilliant. You have done an amazing job of drawing me into the story and enveloping me in the side canon you’ve created. SO well done.

To anyone reading reviews before actually reading the fic, be aware that there is angst and drama, but I swear this is now one of my favorite fics. Please give it a chance.
Fishmoose06 chapter 33 . 1/8/2019
my heart is so happy !
Fishmoose06 chapter 5 . 1/7/2019
Madness chapter 30 . 8/9/2018
Madness chapter 27 . 8/9/2018
"...twilight fans trying to touch the greasy hair of that scrawny wannbe emo vampire."
it's sad that that is a recognizable description...
Madness chapter 16 . 8/8/2018
That's an adorable image: baby Daniel surrounded by Castiel's wings.
takuya chapter 33 . 4/15/2018
oh my destiel fluffy gods, that was one of the best things I've read.
Clara Brighet chapter 31 . 3/26/2018
One of my favorite parts of the previous chapter were the lines exchanged between Gabriel and Dean about Castiel being the best of the angels. Cas has such incredible character development in the show, but - like all character development on Supernatural - it seems to get shunted backwards occasionally, and he's forced to redo a lot of character lessons, so we never quiiite get to see how AWESOME he is. I feel like the show itself (not the fandom) under-appreciates how remarkable Castiel is as an angel who took the actions he did and fought for free will. Just... agh, I loved that last chapter WAY more than I ever anticipated.
Thank you for writing!

This chapter:
HOLY MOTHER OF HECK I am so in love with this chapter. So sweet, so tender, so perfectly in-character... I love seeing how Castiel's feelings toward Daniel have evolved, and that bit at the end with Dean? So perfect. My throat is closing up, I'm so affected by this chapter. Oh my goodness, I think I need to go hug someone... :')

Thank you for writing!
~ Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 30 . 3/26/2018

Clara Brighet chapter 18 . 3/26/2018
Wow, this is... this is so fascinating. Clearly, I'm invested, since I stayed up half the night reading this far. I'm loving that you haven't gone the easy route with, well, basically anything. Cas hasn't suddenly become human with human parental skills, Sam and Dean haven't suddenly turned to mush... everyone is remarkably in character. I especially love how you play Castiel's interactions with other characters, particularly Sam. I feel like Dean and Cas' interactions are sometimes easier to pin down (maybe because there's more of them?), but Cas' interactions with Sam are just as interesting in my opinion, if not always as emotionally charged. I love how you've shown Cas' evolving perspective on Sam, and how he came to care for Sam as well.
LOVED the scene with Gabriel. Fantastic. Hurray for protective Cas!
Also, WOW. That nightmare was a doozy. You had ME freaking out for a second there.
Thank you for writing!
~ Clara Brighet
Clara Brighet chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Oh wow, so far this is good.
I agree with you - I hate mpreg. I don't understand people's infatuation with it, or how they see it as romantic when it would actually have to be unnatural and therefore fairly disturbing and traumatic. (I've read at least two fics that dealt with it in that way, and those were the only mpreg fics I've ever actually read past the first chapter. I think yours will be the third). The premise for this story is fascinating. My gut instinct is to say that this isn't actually mpreg, but I guess I'll have to read further and see what you do with it first.
Thank you for writing!
~ Clara Brighet

I'm glad that you gave us a glimpse of badass Cas. ;) Strangely enough, I feel like we don't get enough badass Cas in the show - or when we do, it's in a context where he's out of character or kind of being a jerk, lol.
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