Reviews for Raw
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 15 . 5/26/2012
hah I knew when the perfume was strong. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 13 . 5/26/2012
hmmm... xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 12 . 5/26/2012
exactly where is he going to hide it? xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 8 . 5/26/2012
hmm he seems ok then. what about alice? xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 7 . 5/25/2012
wow, poor Jasper, I nearly forgot to breathe too. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
surely not Bella, come on, it's a stitch up. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 5 . 5/25/2012
hah nice xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
gah! xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 3 . 5/25/2012
hah makes a change to have a v. strong, mad bella. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
ooh twisty good. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
confusing but good start. xx
Elli-Iris chapter 20 . 4/25/2012
Hate Rosalie? I think I hate both. WTF Does Alice want and how will she use Rose to get it? That was hot voyeristic girl on girl closet sex though. ;-) Iris~Elli
Elli-Iris chapter 19 . 4/24/2012
Um, wow. So Edward. Not happy about Alice. Angry at both of them. A little afraid. Not wanting his worlds to intersect. Answering with rage and passion to Belq. Taking her, or was that her taking him? Hot copier sex. Gather up those papers kids. ;-) evidence. Iris~Elli
Luvtwismut chapter 20 . 4/13/2012
Where do I sign for more lemons! I am in LOVE with this story! Incredily hot and a very fun plot? Yeah, where do I sign?

Xoxo

Jenny
PAWsPeaches chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Oh wow! Very nicely done. I haven't even read the summary but the first chapter has me intrigued. Phil isn't one I'm used to seeing around here so that was a refreshing detail ;) Thanks! I'll be sure to check out the rest soon
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