|Reviews for Damaged|
| Literary Bitca chapter 26 . 12/18/2015
"I DID" just blew my mind. It's suddenly so creepy to think of the machine having a sense of "I".
Well done! This story is still so amazing! Love it!
| Literary Bitca chapter 16 . 12/18/2015
LOVE the flamingo/penguin exchange! You write Finch PERFECTLY. And 50 points for referencing Frankenstein's monster correctly! I adore this story—your writing is superb.
| Literary Bitca chapter 9 . 12/17/2015
*sends a fruit basket and a box of chocolates* Such a great chapter! I love angst, and this installment was so full of it that I think angst was actually dripping down the walls. So well written.
| Literary Bitca chapter 4 . 12/17/2015
This was beautiful and sad! And you do a fabulous job of writing both of them! I can hear their voices so clearly in your dialogue! Well done!
| Literary Bitca chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
You write both of them so well! I love the line about Harold's voice being muffled as he looks down at his tie. :)
| Sarah Fred chapter 38 . 9/24/2015
I loved it. I think it was an amazing plot and intresting story. It captured my attention from the start! I couldn't stop reading. I hope you know how much joy this story brought me.
| simpson-yaoi chapter 14 . 5/6/2015
i love this chapter and others last.
| simpson-yaoi chapter 10 . 5/6/2015
i love this story, that is interesting
| WickedBlue chapter 38 . 3/20/2015
I lost track of your fic a few years ago while jumping fanfoms. Now I could finally catch up and it is still as awesome as the first parts that I read then.
I really enjoyed reading it.
| RainyNightsAreTheBest chapter 38 . 11/7/2014
This was... It was... You are... Wow.
I spent the whole day (real life kept interrupting) reading the chapters, and as soon as I'm finished with this review I'm going to read the extra chapters!
I just had to tell you how much I loved every aspect of this. From the involvement of the CIA to the evolution (for a lack of a better term) of the machine and, of course, Harold's and John's relationship. Is it wrong to use the word beautiful when there was torture and death all around?! Anyway, you created an exquisite story with... I don't even know how to continue my praise, so I'll just stop my rambling right here.(:
| Alinor Gauthier chapter 38 . 10/7/2013
Wonderful :) Loved it. But I couldn't read the torture scene with Mark. Too damn horrible :s
| Steeldust-01 chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
This chapter was perfectly written and to me
absolutely in character.
I'm pretty sure my heart skipped a few beats.
Thanks for sharing.
| Eoeo chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
| Eoeo chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Finch is so cute x3
| Eoeo chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I love that I could picture everything going on as if it were just another episode :)