Reviews for The World Turns Cold
nchi-wana chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
This was a very nice, well-written fanfic. I've always thought Damiya was super creepy (as I'm sure many people do), but you did well in describing his thought processes and reasoning behind the things he did. Well done!
CrimsonQueen24 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Wow this was deep. I enjoyed reading Damiya's reasoning for his actions... You have a great writing style, it's very smooth and nice to read. No grammar mistakes too! That's a plus! :) I hope that you can write more fanfics in this section. Maybe one about Ia-Lu and Erin? Or maybe you can write a fanfic where Erin is raised by Ohjus then is thrust into the human world? That's just an idea I had that I though would be cool.. Anyway despite whether or not you write more, I really did enjoy this one shot. It made me kinda like Damiya even though I never cared for him before. Great job!