Reviews for Sacrifice
Kathy chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Best ive ever seen. I review many fan fictions and write reviews on authors this is one I must share on my blog!
the iz chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
jesus, this was sooo good. you're so right about table sex being just such an obvious progression for them XD
A fan chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
First? My, my. You, dearie, are a natural at this! I can hardly believe it's your first. Beautifully written; really ;)
Linzerj chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Liked it! :)
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I loved it! The reason for him valuing the chiped cup much more interesting than what they showed in the show. I wish you would write other chapters.
YoureHideousILoveYou chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I adored it! Fantastic smut!
NicoleMuenchSeidel chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Wonderfully done! Too many fics out there assume that if he wanted her for carnal activities that he'd force her and/or be abusive. I don't think Rum would ever do that. I think he would seduce the end, leaving the choice to her, because her actually wanting him would be more satisfying.
EnCeQuiConcerne chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
You are joking. That cannot be your first smut. Just. No.
Okay, given that it IS your first, massive congrats. You have skillfully avoided all the traps of first time smut writing that leads to awful smut. Because this...this is just perfect.
First there's the tension, which although is the whole point of this specific ficlet, I feel like a lot of people could learn how to build tension in smut fics. You did it so well!
Second, is the language. Which wasn't massively vulgar (to the point where it just seems ridiculous, unrealistic and awful. Moreover, it is a massive turn-off.) But precise enough to get to the point. Which...ah. Is so required and so sparse.
There is a lot more that could be commented on, for instance the rhythm is your writing fits really well to the smut, but I feel these are often the flaws in first smut writing - and the rest of the amazingness comes from the fact you are just an amazing writer.
ChildlikeEmpress chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Wow. That was intense. Great fic. :D
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Really enjoyed this. You did a wonderful job.
Imaginary Dreams chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
highlyillogical chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I've daydreamed about that table and chair in the main hall as well. This story was perfect, and VERY well written for your first smut! You did a great job with the characterization too. Bravo all around!
prttykitty7728 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Loved it!
Russian8once1psych7 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Intense i think you did a good job on your first smut fic!

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Elizabeth Prince chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Oh my gosh that was your first smut ever? It was one of the best I have ever read! Well done!
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