Reviews for Forgiveness
Yes.My.Queen chapter 5 . 6/19/2012
I haven't even finished this chapter yet, but felt the need to review when i read the words Joan Jett and let out a fan girl screech
imperfectionisunderrated chapter 5 . 6/18/2012
Hm I'm pretty sure Korsak and Frost already know about their relationship, but Korsak definitely. Or perhaps not..

Haha Maura, cute, it was pretty obvious that people wanted to surprise them xD

Lol Angela can finally stop being such a matchmaker now.

Oh Joan Jett, her music is awesome

HAHA drunk Maura is HILARIOUS with capitals. So is Jane. "And I love that thing you do… What is it… That thing…" Jane paused for a moment and stared intently at Maura before shouting "YOUR JOB! That! I love that!" xDDD

Things you shouldn't yell about even if you're drunk: having sex with your girlfriend in the ladies room :'D

The drunk talk was epic, it made me laugh a lot xDD
imperfectionisunderrated chapter 4 . 6/18/2012
Uhuh that's one way to start a chapter, yes.. :D

That was certainly kinky. And it gives an OOC feeling but let us assume they are into that and then it's okay. Especially liked the bit with the handcuffs :D

Aand loved the last sentence. Who would have thought that Jane could have such a fashion sense :D
imperfectionisunderrated chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Oh complications here we go. It's a bit surprising to me that neither Jane nor Maura could handle the sight without notable problems. I'm sure they have seen worse..

It would be good if you somehow indicated that there was a change of scenes, for some seconds I was confused. Though that might be because I'm dumb and others didn't have any problem with it, but.. yeah xD

Hahaha Jane forgot her own birthday? Now that's something xDD

Oh wow Maura was eating naked. Must have been one hell of a sight...
imperfectionisunderrated chapter 2 . 6/18/2012
Though I must say bringing them together in the first chapter was very early. The longer you torment your readers (and yourself too lol) the more fun the whole thing gets :D And I was pretty surprised that Jane asked for time. But you explained that and it made even more sense when she decided to go back 5 mins later xD

Haha I loved the dressing/clothes scene, very tipical of them :D

Lol gotta love flirty Maura.

They went to that lesbian bar? Okay, that was really funny xDD

Okay, one little problem. You're going too fast, I think you should work on the scenes and conversations a bit more, like make them longer, elaborate them more. But your ideas are great and THANK GOD so is the grammar. Same couldn't be said for many, MANY people..
imperfectionisunderrated chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
"What, are you about to star in a runway show?" Haha this.

Frog face lol thinking about that during such a serious moment xD

"You've brought me out of my shell and helped me to understand linguistic devices such as sarcasm. You alone have helped to get rid of my social anxiety." This was so Maura, calling sarcasm a linguistic device and all.

And Jane saying how cool his grandkids would find Paddy haha hilarious.

So yeah, figured I'd review :D
thedarkpassenger85 chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
thanks for the warning at the beginning. lol
afret2010 chapter 3 . 3/16/2012
I think I'd have more than a little bit if trouble concentrating on my meal if I was eating it with a naked Maura Isles! It would be a great birthday present though ;-)
dallas chapter 3 . 3/16/2012
wow.. super hot... more please..
tattoo me1969 chapter 3 . 3/16/2012
i hate hot dogs but now i want a dozen! ugh more please
thedarkpassenger85 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
wow, I don't know about this chapter. Maura would never called Doyle her father...
Dri.Ka.Br chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
Very good continuation of this story is getting better and more interesting.
afret2010 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
Hah, I love the fact that Jane was the one coordinating their outfits for work! I'm surprised Maura didn't faint from shock ;-)
tattoo me1969 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
i hate to beg but i will... more please
Dri.Ka.Br chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
I loved the story, really good! very creative. and you write very well.

deserves a lot of sequels, I want to read all
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