|Reviews for Dragon's Tear|
| Miss ART chapter 20 . 2/2
All I can say is that I LOVE this story! I could start analyzing the plot and characterization but I think you've done exquisitely on both. There are a few grammatical errors but there minor so don't stress. Another thing is its been OVER A YEAR since you've UPDATED this story and it ends on s CLIFFHANGER. So PLEAS I beg thee to update as soon as you get the chance...
| Donser144 chapter 20 . 1/1
I loved this story. Can I just say that Lucy seems a little to cold hearted to natsu. I mean seriously he forced himself out of the only home and family he ever knew, if that wasn't enough he stripped himself of his very identity for Christ's sakes he basically forsake all the years of training and life he had to become the fire dragon slayer. Also, he showed on many occasions that he had no qualms about dying as long as he could see her once more. I mean seriously he all but killed himself for her going so far as to not only give up 10 years of his life but also use the direct product of his life force as a shield to protect her. So all in all he openly embraced and welcomed death just because of one mistake and she doesn't trust him. Also if she was so concerned about the safety of her child why did she get in the way of seyru natsu was willing to accept the punishment for his actions but even if seyru went full power he would have killed not only Lucy and natsu but also their child as well.
| OgaxHilda chapter 21 . 10/15/2014
| OgaxHilda chapter 7 . 10/14/2014
I kinda agree with seryu
| Hohoho chapter 21 . 5/23/2014
You never posted chapter 21.
| winterwind135 chapter 21 . 4/7/2014
THIS MADE ME SO SAD! I've spent six hours of my life reading this story, expecting some more out of it. I read this entire thing today, and i feel like I've gotten to know you and your style of writing so well. This honestly makes me really sad. i will continue to read your other stories, and finish this to the end, BUT THIS MAKES ME SO SAD :C.
Thank you for the journey my friend, and i hope your novel goes well.
| hana rika chapter 21 . 1/28/2014
Heyhey, just done reading the entire story over the last week or so. Must say it's rather impressive safe for some consistent typo's (i think whenever you use creater you should have used crater. A creator is someone who makes stuff and a crater is a hole in the ground.) there are some other words you mistyped in this way but its minor. Anyway love this story, it really shows the hardships they go through. I understand that you will end this story after one more chapter, though it does sadden me a little, was hoping lucy and natsu could have a happy ending. O btw, about that story yu want to write thats your own? I would love to read that! If you ever decide to publish ot on fictionpress or anything, could you pm me here were i can find it?
| AliceTheBookGirl chapter 21 . 1/21/2014
Although it's sad to hear that this story is ending here, I have to say that the story so far is one of my favorites, and I'm not exaggerating. You're a wonderful writer and I really do hope that you can get something published one day. I'll be looking forward to the final chapter, so good luck!
| prettykitty280 chapter 21 . 1/21/2014
... It's it's... ITS ALMOST OVER?!... Little story I wanted to tell...
Okay... So it was December 10th (or something like that).,. It was my birthday and my friends had come over... I had promised that I would read and write on that day to my readers and writers... I was reading an my Best friend Haley came over to see why I wasn't participating with the rest of the group. She saw me reading Dragon's Tear... Yet she couldn't get a glimpse of what it actually said. She got mad at me... I thought that if I showed her that she would think I was weird or abnormal for liking anime and fanfictions... But really when I finally showed her... We too loved it. Dragon's tear was her first NaLu story... And it truth... I think she thinks it's the best... So basically I want to thank you... Now I don't feel so abnormal when I talk to my friends about anime, manga, and fanfictions... I am forever in your debt...
Thanks so much for writing this beautiful peice! I honestly dread the ending, yet I can't wait for it to be over... I understand what you want as a writer... And I support you 100%... I wish you good luck... And when you finally become famous... Please remember us; your readers :)
Now my think my friend's account was banned by her parents so here are a few words from her :)
. We will ALWAYS read your stories, but we need you too keep writing them! Thank you!
Thanks so much!
See ya next chapter
AWH . and HJR ;P
| Lucinda chapter 21 . 1/21/2014
Awwww I love this story soooo much I don't want it to end but still I can't wait for the next chapter :) xxxx
| leoslady4ever chapter 21 . 1/21/2014
I can understand. I too have a story that's begging to be started, your reasoning is sound. I look forward to this story's last chapter. I do hope tool decide to continue Child Of Darkness. I love that story, and of course I'm a huge fan of My Turn. Good luck to you!
| BeauifulFrozenNightmare chapter 20 . 12/25/2013
Make juvia fight Gray! I so want to that to happen that would interesting to see what Gray would do if he had to fight his wife.
| gratsulover117 chapter 20 . 12/20/2013
I loved this story :) please continue this soon
| Rose.A.Harvey chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
Yeah, that's right. I stopped reading it because it made me sad. I CAN'T READ THIS ANYMORE! :'(
| Rose.A.Harvey chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
OH! I've read this before! The guy punches he and she loses the baby right?