|Reviews for Building a Mystery|
| Loves Jack chapter 12 . 8/13/2013
Totally facinating story! I was rivited! Can't wait to find out what happens-see Gibbs and Abby finally "get together"! Excellent writing. Hope you update soon.
| Theresa F chapter 12 . 8/9/2013
Wow, I was just sucked in by this story... You are a great story teller, loving the AU with all the twist and turns!
Can't wait to see what happens next, please post more chapters SOON!
| Semaphore chapter 12 . 6/9/2013
I've read through the twelve chapters in two evenings, and I am hooked. At first I thought it was so far out AU, that I considered jumping ship, but then things started to fall into place. You developed the back stories of Gibbs and Abby masterfully, and now I am anxious to find out how they will find out about their previous connection. It's just hovering right below the surface there, waiting to break out...
And AU Ziva is Mossad too? Wonder how you are going to explain the spy to speech therapist thing!
| STLFAN chapter 12 . 5/2/2013
Another excellent chapter.
Really enjoying this. More, please.
| CairnSF chapter 12 . 5/1/2013
Thank you so much for this chapter! I love the way this story is going, love the way Gibbs and Abby are slowly moving through it. As always, looking forward to the next chapter :). Keep writing.
| Sophies-Welt chapter 12 . 4/30/2013
brilliant ...excellent chapter
| STLFAN chapter 11 . 4/14/2013
Welcome back, I've missed you.
Re-read from the beginning. You are an
excellent story teller. Thanks for the update
and I hope you find time to update soon.
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/6/2013
Just stumbled on this story and read all 11 chapters in one sitting. It really sucked me in. Well written and a great story! Can't wait to read more!
| DreamCatcher chapter 11 . 4/6/2013
Seems like there's been nothing to read on here in ages and then 2 of my favorite MIA stories update on the same day. Thanks for the great read with my coffee this morning. I'm still enjoying this AU tale. I hope u find more time to write soon. Thanks for the update!
| shywr1ter chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
I was so glad to see another chapter! This story is so intriguing; glad to have a bit more info. I certainly didn't see Ziva with Mossad here - am curious to know if Abby or Tim knows!
I really like the mood you've developed; it feels grittier and more stark than the canon NCIS - maybe your starting off with a more unkempt Gibbs set the stage? Whatever the reason, it's been a nice addition to this AU.
Thanks for keeping this going - hope you have time to get us more soon!
| Sophies-Welt chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
Awesome you're back! Love your story ! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| lonelyheartlc chapter 10 . 3/9/2013
Just found this. It is very, very good. Wish you would update :)
| Sophies-Welt chapter 10 . 9/13/2012
Finally found the time to read this chapter, awesome, fantastic, more please!
| Ziver69 chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
Ohhh, this gets better and better.
| Jackie Waugh chapter 10 . 7/25/2012
Please update soon