Reviews for Smile before he's gone
rock lee fan chapter 8 . 7/15
bruh where the next chapter bruh
francis chapter 8 . 7/1
family should and will come first even if i was dying
Epic David chapter 8 . 5/27
Update? :'(
CosmicBeing chapter 3 . 3/12
Oh yeah, fuck this shit.
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 3/12
He better stay cold to them, he's got no reason to like them or Konoha and it better stay that way.
CMVreud chapter 7 . 12/5/2014
That it's more difficult to write the life-changing parts and decisions of stories is a given, I have to say your "versioN" is not half as bad as youself think, and while it may be a little late to say, with now being nearly the end of 2014, I really like your story, it had everything I wished I could write half as elegantly: the fear, the sadness, the fury, actual plot. *hahaha*
No really, not many, even of the good, stories are that heart-gripping from the start.
It's shitty that life seems to cross out many a good writer.
Keep your youthfulness and keep your head high.
I hope you read this comment.
Ja ne.
Scarlet0127 chapter 8 . 9/11/2014
Ah, great story but really hope that you can continue this sometime soon.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/26/2014
kk hope to see it come back soon hope things are better now
robbie chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
really good story but u ruined it by pairing him up with hinata
Guest chapter 8 . 5/28/2014
I dont know if u havent made more but you should continue the story and let naruo live a little twist
Guest chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
very nice piece of work you did man, the drama is so intense good job
Black wraith81 chapter 8 . 1/6/2014
this IS the best naruto romance/tragedy fanfic i've ever read!i'm eagerly waiting for the updates
Guest chapter 8 . 11/26/2013
Really Hope you come back to finish this, Boss. Really good story so far.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2013
maybe kushina should create a seal that can help regenerate left arm
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2013
if naruto diseases is cured the naruto's left arm should be restored or healed or regenerated ( tsunade can give naruto a " Yin Seal: Release" "Creation Rebirth " since Creation Rebirth is the ultimate regeneration technique it can even creation of new cells ) and when activated naruto's left arm can be regenerated or naruto can use kyuubi chakra to restore left arm
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