Reviews for Love the Way You Lie
bookwormie4ever chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
hmm..its a bit to fast alsomst it need more detali but i like its
magicanimegurl chapter 5 . 10/19/2012
Interesting couple, I liked the story!
R.A.T chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Your English is atrocious. Pointers: Keep the story in one tense, one point of view, and EDIT! The story could have a very intriguing plot but I could not make it through the second chapter, very repetative and choppy. Just my opinion, do with it as you will.
6 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
This story doesn't make any sence, and that's saying something, coming from me. Also you repeat alot of the same words all the time.
FerretSong chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I can see Bethan but this is just a bit unreal and is the rating on M if it isnt change it. Kidnap is T but both that and boy x boy is still T but add Jesse in that boy x boy and its disturbing but if you like that ok check out tethered or something like that but is j and e sorry if I affended you.
orionastro chapter 5 . 3/25/2012
very good story, it should have more chapters but ok, i hope you create a new story with them , epic
Silverfox893 chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
do the words Mary sue mean any thing to you