Reviews for Falling to pieces
RepeaterCreeper chapter 1 . 9/12/2016
Not to bad! I like the sad ending. And yes due to peace I would assume that the demoness will never die and ever meet Naruto again. Another assumption is the fact that I think that their children are actually humans. Which makes the story even more sad, as when the Kyuubi and Naruto's children die the Kyuubi will once again be alone.

:C
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
It's your best all right. All the sad fics I've read never affected me... But this one, I read it last year and decided to to review because I don't like sad endings. Every time I thought of it, I shed tears. So today I finally gained the courage to read(and cry) once more before reviewing. I now know how it hurts when an immortal loses the mortal lover. ;(
AngelSlayer135 chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
Very beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Best
Sk4rlos chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
To be honest, if I wasn't reading this one shot in the dark, I wouldn't be sad, but yea, it was sad and I would have expected naruto to pop up at the end to say either; fooled yea, dattebana or believe it! With a healthy immortal naruto.
Kitsune-Radiation chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
I had to punch a hole through my wall to feel manly again.
Silverwolf3351 chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
Make a happy version of this! I cried solo much...
BuHuu chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
That is a wonderful story. Wonderful, but bittersweet, too. I am so sad now and actually crying.

But I can unterstand Naruto, why I didn't want to be immortal. Now he can see all his friends and loved ones in the afterlive.
HitmaN007 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Love it yo
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
This honestly made smell consider tearing up
ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
I suggest you make a 2nd chapter where Naruto actually accepts Kyuu's offer of being turned into a demon. The reason I'm suggesting this is because can't demons visit and see the Shinigami 'cause the demons live in the Underworld, so why can't Naruto just ask the Shinigami if he can visit and see his friends and family? Again I'm just suggesting this idea!
ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
I may not be an author but that was the most saddest thing I read. Right now I'm crying about sad it is to be an immortal
SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
I'm literally crying now I just feel sooo sorry for kyuubi I can't imagine how she feels stupid naruto and his stubbornness why doesn't he just accept kyuubi s offer of becoming a demon?! T.T
Yami chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
How cute. i would have become immortal though
Unknown Reviewer chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Nice story i can safely say that the feels are OVER 9000
still made me sad
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