Reviews for Coming Home
Daizels chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Oh my slippers! That was so beautiful! Changing their roles like that, it kinda makes sense that Raven would stay with Charles!
PureSummerMagic chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I've read all three of your Raven/Charles fics and I loved them! I always felt like there was potential between them in the movie, but it was never touched upon. And the lack of Raven/Charles stories (romance wise anyway) is far and few between. It's such a pity. And I hope Coming Home is not the last fanfic about this pairing that you write. Your characterization of them is spot on and I can easily picture every scene happening. Keep writing. :)
bobsickle chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Good story, but i can't help but notice you gave Charles Telekinesis, I'm not the greatest X-men buff having only watched the movies but I'm pretty sure his powers were limited to Telepathy. Jean was the jack-of-all-trades for psychic powers. He only stopped Magneto from wrecking the ships by physically distracting him.
princessNyxxx chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
If it meant she would have stayed with Charles and they could have had a different relationship then I wish it would have been her in the movie. Great story.
wordonawing chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Excellent story! I like the role-reversal with Raven in the wheelchair. You write the characters well and it was enjoyable to read :)