|Reviews for Starshine|
| Calimom1976 chapter 38 . 3/9
So glad he's opening up!
| Calimom1976 chapter 13 . 3/9
I like this tough Bella!
| Calimom1976 chapter 1 . 3/9
Ew. First impression of Edward: asshole! Hahaha
| momma2fan chapter 209 . 2/8
Great story! Even through a migraine I couldn't stop reading. Thanks!
| demelzapenn chapter 13 . 1/1
| demelzapenn chapter 7 . 1/1
i feel sorry for edward. poor boy i never thought that alice can be this bitchy
| Amanda chapter 146 . 9/12/2013
Lord I am reading this in 2013 and thank the LORD I can read right thru the lemons! I think I would die if I couldn't...girl can you ever do a lemon! But I like the drabble with reader interaction that was cool but loving breezing thru! HE HE HE...
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/4/2013
Aww, hate it when Alice is the bad guy LOL. But, go Bella! :p
| Sakura Crystals chapter 209 . 9/1/2013
WOW! This was one amazing story! I can't believe I just read all of it in a few days! I can't wait to see if you have more stories with these great characters! Thank you for making such a nicely done piece. Its not often I find one that has no draw back. Every chapter was engaging and no character was too ridiculously overdone. To think I only happened across this from a random search. Thank you!
| Just Sus chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
BAD first impression...hope he's not always like this!
| sammieanne chapter 128 . 7/19/2013
Edward should at least have security for Bella, maybe even a car to pick her up while he's gone. I have read this story once, I loved reading it before and I am enjoying it now, you are indeed a wonderful story teller, I call this story a best seller.
| bronzed topaz chapter 209 . 7/18/2013
I loved the transition that Edward made in the story as he slowly healed from what Alice had done to him. He was such as ass at first that I didn't think I could take it (especially after he left her at the bus stop. Idiot) but luckily he quickly kicked that annoying habit. Bella was so good for him and they were so sweet together (plus many other choice words. Sex scene anyone? Whew!)
Alice, Alice, Alice…wow she was bitch! There was one point where I kind of felt sorry for her (Aro. Grrrrrr) but then I realised…she choose to keep doing what she was doing! She had a choice on what she did, and she choose to sleep around and hurt poor Edward. Choose to let him believe that she had killed a baby that could have possibly been his when it really wasn't. So now, she can go to hell and back. Hope she has fun in her porno's!
Side note: love the bitch evil Alice. Well done. She's normally such a good, happy go lucky character and I love the change. It really spiced the story up.
So, thanks for writing and sharing this with us all. I loved it!
| bronzed topaz chapter 121 . 7/16/2013
Just know that it is 3:25 in the morning over here in Australia and I am now going to bed with a smile on my face. Can't wait to read the rest tomorrow!
| sri ffn chapter 51 . 6/30/2013
| sri ffn chapter 50 . 6/30/2013
Sorry im reviewing from chap 50, I was reading from my phone. Reviewing from there is a fail.
So, let me start by telling you I hate touchpads, touch screen hates me too so spell check will be your best friend while reading my comments.
I'm really enjoying this story till now, looking forward to reading more.
And no, if I were bella, I'd just hang that carrot in front of his face and not share a word because I'm better than Alice and her games.