| Reviews for Remember |
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   jcampbellohten chapter 7 . 2/13/2015 Whaaat? I am so curious right now what he means by that last line. So intriguing! Only a few typos mar the excellent writing, as well. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 2/13/2015 He's such a troll! Lol! It says Lancer "could throw Gae Durg" and knock Gae Bolg out of Archer's hands. Did you mean Gae Buidhe? Because I don't think Lancer had a third spear and it says "Gae Buidhe had left his hand". Also, there should only be one O in "to" where it says Irisviel cutely poked her head around a corner to see what was going on. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 I'm looking forward to reading this. This Archer is hilarious, and apparently a tactical genius. "Operation Hercules" was funny at first because I thought it was just a snarky reference to the Nine Lives Works method, haha. The cleaning compulsion, hahaha! The writing itself is also great. It says Kirei was still just a kid, "compared the the Kotomine he remembered," where it should say, "compared to the..." |
| Takai153 chapter 12 . 2/12/2015 Great chapter! Can't wait to see the ramifications to the disclosure of Archer's ident you and past. And Rider's banquet is sure to be fun. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! :) |
| Xahn777 chapter 12 . 2/10/2015 Poor Waver... having to pay for Saber and Rider's food... Anyway I really like this story, it's a shame you haven't updated this in such a long time. |
| Zentari2238 chapter 12 . 2/9/2015 This is by far your best fanfic . It's choke full of action and scheming as well as getting the character's personalities down right . All in all , a very solid read . |
| azix39 chapter 12 . 2/1/2015 A feast fit for a king! Can't wait to see that. Great writing so far, I'm enjoying the psychology |
| Faraway-R chapter 12 . 2/1/2015 "Sure, sure, whatever, don't accidentally conquer the town." Keyword: Accidentally. The tide of fun is coming. :) |
| darkangelwp chapter 12 . 1/25/2015 This is awesome! I'm curious if the counter guardian bit will play a part in this story. It's also interesting that none of archer's other weapons have been used. Very interesting. Please update soon! |
| ArcherShirou chapter 12 . 1/18/2015 very good |
| tryal-leaf chapter 12 . 1/7/2015 The plot of this fic is really interesting, and I like how you don't short change any characters in their development, personalities, or skills. I've read so many fics where the "bad guys" are basically curb stomped by the "good guys" no contest. Yours is really refreshing in that regard :) One thing that could be improved on are descriptions of the environment. There are a lot of places where I had a hard time imagining what the setting looked like, and if I didn't watch fate/zero before, I would have absolutely no context. Overall though, I really loved it :D Looking forward to more! tryal-leaf |
| wingofpain chapter 12 . 1/1/2015 And young future Lord El-Melloi II went bankrupt, pity for him I really like this fic and the change made by Archer appearance ) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/29/2014 I LOVE THIS STORY, ITS AWESOME & MAKES ME LAUGG! |
| Andrew MacKenzie chapter 12 . 12/28/2014 Excellent story! |
| Rakaan chapter 12 . 12/26/2014 Bwahahaha, can't wait to read about the feast! |