|Reviews for Danny Cooper|
| ToaGaimZXA chapter 20 . 1/8
Cool, please update soon!
| ArtsyDovahkiin chapter 20 . 10/23/2015
I remember reading this back when it only had a couple chapters and it's only gotten better since; both story-wise and grammar-wise. I'm sure you already have a plan for how you want the story to turn out, but it would be very cool if Danny replaces Murray on being captured; you also get the chance to explore the whole 'wants to be a cop' thing then.
A helpful tip for trying to stay inspired without much effort/writing a new chapter is to go back through your works and fix them up a bit. Not enough to be considered a rewrite, but just enough to fix some mistakes you no longer make. I know it's helped me.
| KeybladeSamurai chapter 20 . 10/6/2015
I do have an idea for when the Clockwerk parts are all taken care of and destroyed. Spoilers for everyone who hasn't played Band of Thieves. Since Sly surrenders to Carmelita, he can request that Danny joins the force since, technically, he is not a criminal. In the meantime, since Carmelita will capture Murray while their in Canada, this can give Danny the chance to talk to her, to try and work something out. Anyway, keep up the great work, looking forward to what comes next.
| Neffy chapter 20 . 6/26/2015
Please do more I really like this being a huge sly Cooper fan myself. I love how you have incorporated Danny phantom into the second game like this. This is one of the most unique and interesting things I've ever read.
| Chizure chapter 20 . 3/30/2015
This is going really good.
I remember playing the game when they were tring to get on the train w/out touching the ground. Man that was difficult for me when I 1st played, but now it's easy.
Can't wait to read ur next chapter. （ω）
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/22/2015
I liked how you were able to mix a great and great tv show togheath there both of my favorite hope the next is posted soon
| hollowwind chapter 20 . 3/5/2015
well this sucks thise was a good story goodluck with any ather stories
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/15/2015
cant wait for the next chapter this story has been great so far it combine my favorite game and show
| Saiyan Moon Goddess chapter 20 . 1/17/2015
Damn, I remember that level of the game. Not one of my favorites I'll admit; even in video games I tend to really dislike snow and ice. My favorite part is the mission where you have to jump from the lighthouse carrying a bomb and land on the moving trains WITHOUT touching the ground or you go boom. Hilarious!
Really rushed chapter you got here. Of course the game had its nonsensical moments. If anything, Danny might repeat that comment about Bentley when they have to go into the bear cave. I know I did. Are you gonna bring in Carmelita? I loved pickpocketing her in the 2nd game. It lead to such funny chase scenes. I think she brings in more tension than the actual boss fights, specially in the third game... Who she captures, however, is up to you, though I bet if Danny was at least in view he would enjoy it. If I wasn't moving Sly I would've enjoyed it more too!
| LeviathanTamer chapter 20 . 1/13/2015
Sorry for not reading and reviewing more, I've been without internet for a while. But man, it's hard to believe how far this story has come. And on so few reviews (Even less when you consider their quality). It's good to know that even if you're peeved with the readers, and only give them scraps, they're still funny scraps. Just don't give up on the story, I know people that have written 10 chapters of over 3,000 words each that only have 15 reviews and only 3 of the reviews actually mean anything. Talk about running off of dedication.
| Sugarhoneymouse chapter 20 . 1/12/2015
I don't have much advice, but I recommend that you say a sentence out loud; if you take a natural pause, add a comma; if you think the sentence could be divided into more sections, use a semicolon. It's also best to separate author notes from the story, you can use a line break by going into document management and adding one. I hope you find my advice helpful; I'm not that experienced at writing, but I've learned a few tricks to help me.
| gamelover41592 chapter 20 . 1/12/2015
that was good
| Owldusk chapter 19 . 1/11/2015
| Saiyan Moon Goddess chapter 19 . 9/7/2014
Hey there! Sorry for my laziness, I actually read this chapter the moment I got the alert. Anyway, points to Danny for such a bold statement at the end of this update. I hope the team's opinion of him doesn't change for the bad. BTW, since Danny's powers changed, can he still do the ghostly wail? Also I wonder if Clockwerk and Vlad had a connection somehow. That would interesting.
| gamelover41592 chapter 19 . 9/5/2014
good job on this chapter