|Reviews for The Railways End|
| WarpWizard chapter 15 . 3/19/2004
Superb as always.
Plot twist: Gah! I am confused/horrified. Can't poor Shinji catch a break? Sadness...
| jennyjennai chapter 15 . 3/18/2004
Excellent chapter! I loved the shifting of sub-plots and I knew when they got to the graveyard what was happening (at least I think so anyway). Hm, this is getting more interesting as each new chapter arrives...
| sakura117us chapter 15 . 3/18/2004
This is such a good story! please continue soon. _
| Shazorn chapter 15 . 3/17/2004
Ah, lovely little Miyu, one of the most frightening
maidens of anime. Dream's discussion of her with
Shinji brings to mind the Fox-Broome theory of
parallel worlds, if you will permit me to refer to
the other of my favourite Eva stories (Foxboy's).
And, you're right, there is a certain similarity
between a vortex and the Human Instrumentality
| Beliall chapter 15 . 3/17/2004
As good as always with a nice Suprise in the end
BUT it had been to long since the last chapter ...
| legacyZero chapter 15 . 3/16/2004
Good chapter. I wonder what you have planned for Shinji in the later chapters...
| Soul Ice chapter 15 . 3/15/2004
cant wait for the next instalment this story is truly good i vant wait to see what hapens in the next chapter
| FinalMax chapter 14 . 1/11/2004
I've noticed something interesting through the story. The emerald that Dream wears keeps shrinking. I wonder, does it mean that he is fading away? Is he fading like Odin and other past dreams? It also begs another question: Is a Vortex a possible Dream, or an abnormality in the Dreaming?
I must admit, I do not really know anything about the Sandman series; but I enjoy this tale anyways. It intrigues me with its surreal imagery and themes, which strangely fit the world of Evangelion. I would suggest you make things a little more clear for some of us, but I don't know if it will help or hurt the story.
| Jonathan chapter 10 . 12/27/2003
I love this story it makes me sad and happy at the same time. Please update soon it is a story that shoud have a happy ending.
| Suekeiichi Kaiton chapter 14 . 12/27/2003
Excellent story! I really like the way you brought 'Luke' into the fold and brought the Norns (and the angels of 'Wish') into the story. Please continue this!
What happened to the Corinthian?
| jennyjennai chapter 14 . 12/27/2003
Excellent chapter! I have waited a long time to read the next installment of this fic, and the wait was definitely worth it! Thank you for continuing to create more chapters for this fic. It is riveting and moving, more than once I had tears in my eyes. The way you convey emotions in the writing is unique and your characters are are three-dimensional. You have done a fine job especially with Asuka, you portray her as she is; The broken little girl that hates herself as much as Shinji does. More often than not, she turns her anger and hatred outward to others rather than turning it inward like Shinji does. I will check back over the other chapters to make sure I review each one. I have noticied that there aren't as many reviews here as there should be, that is given the quality of the work you have posted. I hope that more people decide to read and review for you. I hope to see another chapter soon. Thank you again for sharing.
| WarpWizard chapter 14 . 12/26/2003
As always, absolutely exquisite. A thousand blessings be upon your pen.
| Azzitay chapter 13 . 11/13/2003
Dear Author , Please , PLEASE
write more !
I m begging now ... darn , i have
never read such a good , touching Fanfiction (well , the Ah my Goddes PArt was a bit ... out) !
It is so well written , can you continue it please ?
| Azzitay chapter 9 . 11/13/2003
Dammit , after reading this i am intrested in reading the damn comics ...
HELL THIS FIC IS DARN GOOD !
I am SO impressed !
| Stratagemini chapter 13 . 10/13/2003
Hm... Shinji meeting a Norse God? it makes you wonder. I like the way that shinji has very little confidence, but little by little it seems to be growing. I like both Eva and Sandman, plus the cameos by death are not to be overlooked. Neil Gaiman's Death is the most kick ass death ever created. Am I off topic? Heh. Anyway, there are very few spelling errors in the fic, and overall it's well written. So, please keep writing.