Reviews for The Heart Breaks Harder the Second Time
Jadziwine chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
this was a wesome!
mcfuz chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Hmm. Well, I LOVED the beginning, how Merlin was all like "Hells yeah I confirm my magic!"
Just a few things here. Morgana doesn't know about Merlin's magic, and Hunith definitely does (she's Merlin's mother, so, obviously...lolz). And also, just a pointer when you're writing speech. Try not to include a slash in it, like you've written are/were. Try to write how it would actually be said, so, are or were. It just helps with the flow.
All in all, though, this was nice and a good few minutes were spent reading this, though I did think the ending a little weaker than the rest of it, and perhaps a little cliche. That's just me, though.
Well done!
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Great one-shot. :)
Merlinfanatic77 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
One word ~ Amazing!
captainwest chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
This One-shot is great! :)
faithlessducks chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Merwen... always good. weet to give your bff a shout out!
arthurgwen2010 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I loved it... The friendship between gwen and merlin and of course arwen moment. I'm glad you're back. Lol. xxx
whitecrossgirl chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I love reveal storys where everyone gangs up on Arthur; i did the same in mine 'the Truth Revealed'