|Reviews for Returning Home|
| Parker and Me chapter 7 . 11/19/2013
Hi, I don't know if ur still doing this, but it is reaaallly good. Please update! I love this (Even though I love Jiper)!
| Kiku Nakamura chapter 7 . 9/29/2013
For your new fic u can put more than 2 characters down. Its allowing 4 characters at once now.
| Fangirling500 chapter 7 . 6/10/2013
I really enjoy this story a lot! You're writing style is very elegant, basically you're a good writer. Reyna is one of my favorite characters, and even though I'm a hardcore Leo/Reyna shipper, I have always wondered about Jason and Reyna. I wish they had settled things, or had actually intercted with one another in MOA but oh well. You are doing a really good job portraying all of the characters. I look forward for more. Keep it up!
| meadow-music chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
Wooo... Hopefully in your new story you will focus on the better part of Octavian.
| trustingHim17 chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
nice! i'll have to read that.
on a different note, all the chapters you uploaded are still saved here, so unless you were referring to chapters you hadn't uploaded, your story is still saved
| neva chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
hey, i've just finished reading your story and i loved it! please don't think i'm mad or overreacting when i say it is better than MoA. I don't know are you still asking for opinions, but i think you should definitely continue!
| Continue this chapter 6 . 4/25/2013
Love the jeyna.. Please keep going!
| geniusbookworm chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
pick up where MOA left off with jeyna and percabeth please
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2013
I really like this so far so puh-leaaase option1?
| meadow-music chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
I think that your spin on the Mark of Athena is a good one and would be great to continue. Just use an alternate storyline (with the target villan NOT being Octavian- show a different side of him PLEASE). I think you would do great.
| meadow-music chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
I like the caring Octavian from the previous chapters. You should draw out his caring, loyal, protective, respected, respectful, leadership warrior side.
| Story Admirer chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
I really like this story! You have an amazing grasp on the characters and give them a lot of depth. I'd like it if you continued this story, but I'm happy either way as long as there's a lot of Jason and Reyna! You're a great writer.
| xXweirdofanfreakersXx chapter 6 . 3/30/2013
FINISH THE STORY PLZZZZZZ!
| subtle touches chapter 6 . 3/28/2013
I think you should just go with when MOA left off, since it would be rather interesting to see, but you should just keep this story where it is, please do not delete it, I would have liked you do to both but hey, you can't get everything. :: shrugs::
| Anna Louisa chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
"The next person to draw a knife loses a hand."
That was, without a doubt, the best line I have ever read in any story EVER.