|Reviews for What If?|
| Rjones308 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
I think it was a interesting idea and a touching story for your first time. Don't stop writing.
| jessieleigh528 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Awe! That was really cute. You did a good job and I like that it was mpreg and I love Tony/gibbs.
| a troll chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Wow, how stupid are the members of the NCIS fandom including you! Some time ago as payback for really mean reviews, to drum up interest in my fics and as a bit of a joke some friends and I started posting critical reviews under various names but mostly RAAA - Readers Against Arrogant Authors. We didn't think anyone would pay that much attention to them as they were clearly troll reviews but the over reactions (disabling anon. reviews, posting notes on stories/profiles, fics. defending me. and pms) of site members have been truely hilarious to read so we kept it going. You all fail cyber commonsense 101.
It's been too easy and now I'm moving on. You've been successfully trolled. ;-0
Belated April Fools And Happy Easter Everyone.
Herky Illiniwek aka: Erynn Phelps (find me on Facebook for more fanfiction fun) and the RAAA - Readers Against Arrogant Authors.
| Magpie1600 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
We can all do the what if scenario. It is a hard road to travel. Loved the tale and how it encompassed alot of emotion.
| Jebeth chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
It was lovely, I really enjoyed it.
| your-icequeen chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I liked this a lot and would love to see it developed into a longer fic... but I am just a sucker for MPREG.
| victoriantealady chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Hey TeamDiNozzo, you did good.
| MarieKiki19 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Awwwww! So sweet! I like it a lot! You have my permission to some more of Tibbs... ;-)
| Oya Yansa chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Wonderful fic. I loved it!
| Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Aww, loved how he shifted from his 'girls' to his 'boys'...So sweet. Great work! :)
| aalma chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Hey, I liked your story at the beginning, but then I had to stop reading because it was mpreg. Don't get me wrong, I'm sure it was a nice fic in its genre, but it's just not my thing, so please - remember to put a warning for that in the future
| Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Very nice job. I would love to see this as a longer fic give some background on how they got together.
| DS2010 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I like it :)
| Rowena Prince chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
This was cute. Nice job.
| lizrat66 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Great story, would love it to have been a multi-chapter story, you have all the elements of one. Love Tibbs, mpreg and how Tony and Gibbs met.