|Reviews for Weapons of Mass Destruction|
| spewing rainbows chapter 16 . 3/13
That was freaking awesome.
I have to say, this is the first truly AU code geass fic that I've read that manages to incorporate so much good canon stuff in. I mean. CHARACTERIZATION. I love how you made Suzaku and Lelouch brothers, because, really, canon treated them so miserably, and everyone secretly wanted them to stick together and conquer the world together without a tragic ending.
They just WORK together. Plus, Lelouch's mind mastery manipulation stuff is in total full gear in this fic. Other fics that try to work with canon - they can only go so far. And Suzaku's character also really gets to be written out very well here. I love the dynamic the two have. True brotherhood right there.
I also love your portrayal of undercover!Lelouch and undercover!Naoto. It makes me giggle maniacally each time Lelouch pulls one of his stunts - ESPECIALLY WITH JEREMIAH. Part of me hurts with his conscience...but Lelouch is also ruthless and you portray those two contradicting sides brilliantly. Naoto is also characterized nicely, based off of what we were told in canon - love his undercover as well.
And Kallen. You don't know how long I was waiting for her to get recruited into Lelouch's circle. It's like I knew it was coming, I just didn't know how or when...but I knew it was coming and that it was going to be a great build up and everything and I'M SO EXCITED TO SEE HER GET INTO A KNIGHTMARE AND START WREAKING HAVOK. Like, you take little bits of canon and interweave them into the plot and its freaking brilliant. And the build up is perfect, that's one of the best parts. I anticipate CC's role and build-up as well. LIKE. THE PLOT IS ALREADY COMPLICATED AND BRILLIANT AND CC HASN'T EVEN FULLY ENTERED THE FRAY YET. AND NEITHER HAS KALLEN. OR OHGI. OR GIN OR TAMAKI OR ANYTHING AND I CAN JUST SEE IT ALL COMING TOGETHER and I'm so excited for it. :D
I'm going to be spending the next while reading your other multi-chapter fic, haha. I originally started this one on the off chance that this might end up to be subpar, and I didn't want to spend hours reading your other fic if the writing wasn't really good...
BUT IT IS. YOU DID NOT DISAPPOINT.
Continue writing, please!
| neverlasting-legend chapter 16 . 3/11
Shit. That was freakin' impressive. I don't even know how you go about weaving a story this intriguing. My favorite parts had to be the manipulation of Jeremiah to be honest.
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/3
This story is fantastic. Please continue! I really enjoy the character development and what you have done with the characters.
| ringongbell chapter 1 . 2/25
The author's other work, "Dauntless" was breathtakingly comprehensive, with a wealth of complex characters grow with the progress of the varied plot of the story. In "Dauntless" the characters, particularly Lelouch, develop new masks and layers that slowly diverge from canon, until they become compelling original characters in their own right while retaining the features that identify them as possible AU personas of their canon counterparts.
"Weapons of Mass Destruction" is a work of even greater imagination. The worldbuilding and characterbuilding is markedly different from canon, taking the plot to interesting directions. A commandeering Suzaku, a submissive Lelouch. And especially Naoto; "Dauntless" gave flesh to the phantom impression of the Naoto from canon. WoMD's Naoto is an even more complete and conflicted creature. Fascinating and fantastic writing.
| Laci chapter 16 . 2/16
Dear Allora Gale,
You've made us laugh; you've made us cry. You made us think and worry. You've impressed us time after time with complex situations in your beautiful writing. You've introduced us to new and incredible characters and defined a world we all love so well.
Now you make us worry and not just got Kallen. It has been about three months since we have last seen you update even your profile. It is not for the sake of the story I write this; I just want to know if you're alright honestly.
Interest in fandoms die off; I'll be the first to confess this. It is just strange when you had such a consistant prescense that you have now faded without a word. I will not hold it against you if Dauntless and Weapons are never finished; I merely want some sign that their writer is okay. Because Allora, you have made us care.
Your adoring fans
| joshuafaramir chapter 16 . 2/15
Finally. Been waiting for the dots to connect. While I do like the character development you're making, I sometimes feel they're a bit fillerish. I skim through some of the Milly-Kallen interaction.
Anyway, I like this fic. Hope to see updates soon
| 0aka chapter 16 . 2/14
Update update update!
I need more, you have no idea how interesting this story is I finished the story in one sitting
As I had reviewed before as a guest UPDATE!
| 0aka chapter 16 . 1/22
| PinkSugarDust chapter 16 . 1/11
Really interesting story! Please update soon :D
| lori deviona chapter 16 . 1/9
this is one of those great structured, great plot-line, great interactions, great mood kind of fics. i love it. i really hope you find some time to continue it
| kingrichard360 chapter 16 . 1/7
beautiful I love it. this reminds me so much of Eden of the east, mehn I miss that show.
please keep up the good work with both dauntless and WMD, I'm rooting for you
| schoolsucksass chapter 16 . 1/2
Lelqouche is so perfect omg update soon please...
| Lightimus chapter 16 . 12/30/2013
Love this new story! I am a big fan of dauntless and I didn't realize you made a new one until yesterday. The way you seamlessly tie the plot together while adding in such realism is just breath taking. Love the story and am eagerly awaiting more!
| Lord22 chapter 16 . 12/24/2013
I really liked this chapter. It was nice to see Kallen and Naoto reconcile. However I am REALLY hoping that Kallen's step mom dies a horrible death at this point.
| dalulzing chapter 16 . 12/22/2013
Great pacing and dialouge