|Reviews for Baby Uke's?|
| Angry Reviewer chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
Oliva is NOT A MARY-SUE! If you read her other stories, you will find WHY they like her fucking assholes. Read her other stories THEN comment. And if anyone is a pedo its you. You clearly clicked the story and read some chapters knowing uke mean the 'woman' of the relationship. Stop spamming with hate. Flames are for constructive criticism .
| Lilly chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
You had this as a dream wow
| Rikurikumiru90 chapter 7 . 3/16/2013
Lover of Akatsuki... "Lover" isn't exactly the term, is it? XD I wonder if she's screwed by Konan too, to complete the whole plot...
| xXTheXAkatsukiXAngelXx chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
Nah Sasori wouldn't do that but it wouldn't surpirse me if itachi flirted with DeiDei hehe the dreaded nickname!and kakuzu ummm its a blank to me
| Scarlett chapter 3 . 2/26/2013
| Konata the Cat Demon chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Lovely way to respond hidan! and surprisingly you didn't yell at him for cursing infront of olivia
| Konata the Cat Demon chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
For Dei-kun and Sasori-kun if you have ever done a threesome with Oliva would you have used your strings/3 mouths on her along with some toys?
| Konata the Cat Demon chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
The hottest member is probably Sasori or Deidara /
| Konata the Cat Demon chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Hahaha! This story was hilarious! I never even expected Hidan not to curse infront of Oliva while being a parent! XD
| Les chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
You sure have problems, I hope you grew out of that shit... Fucked-up story, I might say.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/13/2012
Your OC is a Mary-Sue, because:
- She's adored by every Akatsuki member without having a limb teared up;
- She wants to be referred by them as a hot, pretty lady (forcing yourself much, honey?)
- She thinks Hidan wouldn't tell her to fuck off and kick her out of the Akatsuki hideout as soon as they finish their fuckfest;
- She thinks she can manipulate every character without being killed.
MY! SUCH PERFECTION!
Mary-Sue all over. Get a grip, girl, stick to the canon characters, please...
| CreamCornification chapter 12 . 10/3/2012
There wasn't a single chapter that didn't have me laughing... or feeling kind of awkward. "Why awkward?", you migh ask. The reason: my name is Olivia. That's actually why I decided to give this story a go in the first place. Reading this was EXTREMELY entertaining! I only wish there was more sexy time with Kisame... ;D
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
This story sucks badly. :( Stop writing in the bathroom, you sick mary-sue. Paedophilia sounds so funny to you?
| ThePlayerSinger chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
singer:me and my sister both had to ask you something so we thoght why not ask together?My question is what if you guys were straned on an island?But the hole thing was a fake to make a porno?
Player...i am sadly realated to that girl...and by player i mean violin...and i had a request, i realy want to see MADARA, under the influence of the baby drug...PLEASE DON'T RAPE ME!
| random fan chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
hey do you think you can make one where the potion returns and tobi, Deidara and the oc are the parents and zetsu, sasori and hidan are the kids?