Reviews for Flight of Birds
siu-saidh chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Simple, yet beautifully written and within the region of canon personality. Loved it!
doesitsaycolonel chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
"You are not." Hal said, very slowly and clearly, "Touching. My head." Very very right on! Thank you - I do love snippet stories or glimpses behind the scenes. Really got his character as we know it so far. L
deleted123789543 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
It was so sweet when Hal gave her that oragami rose x

Lovely story, with a nice ending line x
aprilf00l chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Nice Hal/Annie fic!
Ruby Rosetta Red chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
What a nice thought, origami birds around Eve's crib.

Rather short but nicely done, you definitely had the essence of Hal here. I liked the part where he tells her she's not touching his head.
AngelRays95 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
This was brilliant - I especially love the description of Hal being dark but not savage. Fits his character perfectly. It would be great to see more fanfics like this, so please write some more!