Reviews for The Birthday Present
SparkyPlug chapter 8 . 2/24
Nice story. Makes me want to punch Malfoy, and curious about the gears turning in his father's mind. By the by, how is dear Draco?
Rum chapter 8 . 2/7
Actually i very much like Scorpius, but maybe that's just personal bias LOL. I'm very sad this story isnt finished but its spectacular so far! Hope you decide to continue it i love it alot. The only critical thing id say about it is that i would have thought Roses family be more considerate to Scorp because its not his fault hes a descendant of 'evil people'. I mean come on, freaking Harry Potter saved Draco that time in the 7th book and they hated each other but he forgave him so shouldnt have the rest of the family? thats just my take please dont hate me i mean i reeeaaallly love your story :D
vaaleee chapter 1 . 1/17
i love your writing and i love this story! and it would be wonderful if you wanted to continue this story
lolwtfrachel chapter 8 . 1/17
I love this story but sadly it hasn't been updated for a bit. Scorp does seem like a right douchebag I hope Rose just breaks down crying and makes Scorp freak out. Rose should invest in being a Slytherin to get what she wants.
It'sBeenARealSlice chapter 8 . 1/7
i really like this story! please continue it? i need to know what happens! plus i'm looking forward 'burning with fire' part haha
smilingforeverandever chapter 8 . 1/2
PLEASE UPDATE!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2014
Please update! This is amazing!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
Love it! Please keep the story up!
Hypatiia chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
love the story 3
Anna Flavia chapter 8 . 12/8/2014
Hi, new reader, loving the story :) sorry for the short review, not my first language haha
Electric Reader chapter 8 . 12/6/2014
I will forever be incomplete if you don't finish this.
So... Pretty please with Scorpius on top? :)
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2014
Oh my god that was awesome! Please update soon. Its been a really long while. Also, are you alive?
Your loyal and loving fan(AKA. Me) hasn't seen you around lately.
Please update ASAP!
I love your works.
Fionamoi chapter 8 . 11/14/2014
this is really interesting and entertaining!
is he a veela? or part veela or something? or is he just really an ass? ;)
please PLEASE update soon!
I'd really like to read more!
PLEASE?!
Maxi OT chapter 8 . 11/13/2014
It's over. Ah. See? I told you I'd get into an emotional stage.

What's left now? My whole existence cycling around an other chapter, gosh,
how shall I live like this?

Okay, I'm over it (for now) because I'd really like to thank you for yet an other
fun chapter and really can't wait for more.

So, thank you very, very much. I hope school is going well for you and you're
not too stressed. Life sometimes runs without us having a moment to just breathe
and relax - so I hope you get a little break from everything!

See you in Chapter Nine, I guess!

Love,
Maxi
Maxi OT chapter 7 . 11/13/2014
I'm so, so, so glad, that I have an other chapter ahead of me,
because, let's face it - after Ginny fucking Potter entering the room, it's just .. ah!

My favorite was undenieable the part where Scorpius asked Rose to stop and she was
like, ah, sorry, I would, but my fists signed the anti-retraction statement.

I was bursting out laughing, which, considering that I was supposed to watch a children's karate
class at this very moment was a little inappropriate, but none the less I'd do it again!

There is a little fear for the next chapter inside me, well not really the next chapter, but rather the
end of it, because - and now we're coming closer to the problem - I completely understand, that
life is busy and you need time to create this wonderfully written story, but now I'm addicted and
will spend precious moments of my life longing for an other chapter (getting some drama in here,
y'a know, to make it all a little more, .. well, dramatic) and I know it will be worth it,
because you're brilliant and your stories are brilliant, and your plots are brilliant and your
wittiness is even more brilliant (that's the part where I throw all that love at you and you
feel obliged to upload an other chapter soon - no pressure of course, take your time, but
maybe you wanna take in consideration that my love for all the brilliant-ness that you are showing
would only grow with more chapters - nah? are we on the same page there? - I'd throw in one
of those slimey smileys, but well, that would probably be an over-do anyway, not that my love
confession wouldn't be enough ..)

So yeah, well, anyway - after this short *cough* little review from me,
I'll just gonna go on and read the next chapter, cause I can and obviously must .. yeah ..
Sorry for that :D

Love,
Maxi
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