Reviews for An Imperfect World
abutterflymind chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
I wish this had a sequel- it works so well as a oneshot- it really hits hard how his life has changed and the last sentence is heartbreaking- but I actually want to see more of this imperfect world. I confess it's conjured up several ideas in my own head as to how other parts of Kent's new life must be now. As well as an idea for a crime that finally sees him finding himself out in the field again.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Ong that made me cry so much
Hoshie13 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
BRB actually crying. I'm not sure what to say. I thought you might end it with suggestions of suicidal thoughts, but instead you brought it back around to that first sentence and how he was doomed to doing something he hated, just on the outside of his old life, and it was so much more painful.
kikokishik chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
All the tears. Nice story, but still all of the tears.