|Reviews for One Direction Story|
| Rule Enforcer chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
There is a ton of stuff that you need to work to fix. One: check to make sure Document Manager on this site did not automatically bold everything.
Two: numbers ten and under need to spelled out.
Three: capitalized the start of every sentence and every proper noun.
Four: look up the correct spelling for people's names.
Five: use paragraphs because no one will read a bunch of solid text.
Six: learn how to format the dialogue properly.
Seven: read the guidelines and learn that using real people such as Zayn from One Direction is not allowed.
That is the only things that I really saw that were majorly wrong.
| louisaloves1D chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
You should check your spellings Like Niall Liam louis And yeah so run it through spell check next time
| B-a-r-t-i-a chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I don't want to be rude but I couldn't finish the story because everything was in bold font! The spelling and capitalization is really bad. Please work on that then I will definitely read!
| NegligibleNaina chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
I really like this story! It was really sweet, but it was quite hard to read with all the spelling mistakes and such. Maybe run in through SpellCheck? Just a suggestion. Again I really liked it! You should upload another one!