Reviews for Lonely Bridge
Electricity chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Love the way Pegasus talks! It's just faaaaabulouuuus!
IntraSule chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Aw, that was sweet! X)
InTheShadowOfSignificance chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This was a very cute story, I found your characterization flawless and well-executed. These two have always interested me and I appreciated their subtle mannerisms as opposed to some full-out romanticism.

Pegasus was delightfully playful with that somewhat paternal air he's always seemed to have around Otogi, and I loved that we can get a feel for their age difference. Pegasus has plenty of confidence but Otogi is still young, fumbling, and easily flustered. In any case I won't ramble, this was a cute story and did real justice to the characters.

Please keep writing.