|Reviews for The Bad In Each Other|
| OMG GREAT STORY chapter 1 . 18h ago
AMAZING! Please write more!
| Zoe chapter 1 . 3/8
PLZ U HAVE TO WRITE MORE!;(
| Ninazadzia chapter 1 . 2/12
hiogshvifzbviawrhsfohoheoudshfohvouhefohds words can't even describe the love that I have for this fic. Bravo, bravo. This is stellar.
| JanuaryWords chapter 1 . 1/30
That was soooo good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
Good idea... Not very exciting :(
| Brocasica chapter 1 . 1/12
That is amazing!
| RandomPerson chapter 1 . 1/3
Wow! Really well written and moving! Quick and to the point but also elegant and beautiful. Gave me goosebumps! Lovely!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
please continue this omg
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
This was sad, but written so so so well! Keep writing :)
| december wastelands chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
this was heartbreaking.
i'm just going to cry on the floor now.
anyway. i really liked this — not just the plot, all the little twists (which i'm guessing belongs to aimmyarrowshigh), but all the details. like, that one female commentator, showing how even capitolites are human. your one-sentence-a-paragraph style, which is so concise and has the most subtle ways of revealing things instead of straight-out saying things.
the italics as dialogue was a really nice touch, too. prim slowly changing because of the games broke my heart — i really like aus where prim goes into the games, like /the precious little girl who glowed./ but this goes deeper, how she really does kill foxface, and how katniss actually is willing to leave her because she's so different.
and the galeniss. the galeniss was flawless, how gale wouldn't let katniss volunteer, how katniss was mad at him for days. it was /perfect./ and then, in the end, things still aren't quite right, and gale just wants katniss back, and eventually they leave even though prim wins, and rue dies, and cato and thresh die, and prim poisons clove and kills her and peeta dies, and just. why. why.
also, all the things about mrs. everdeen, who really seemed to have loved her husband, but instead it was spun as her husband being an evil coal miner. and how much the everdeens and mellarks must be hurting. (also, point for the lack of everlark, not because i dislike it, but because it would be awkward when she was what, his half-half-sister?)
beautiful, /beautiful/ fic. ;-;
| StarsAtNight chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
oh, this is undoubtedly the MOST artful story i have ever read. i just can't say enough. it was perfection. the agony and depth of negative emotion was so well illustrated here.
oh, prim, sweet, sweet prim turned putrid.
i hate you because you write better than me. and i love you because you write so beautifully.
thank you so much for this loveliness in word form.
| ProngstheMarauder15 chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
This is actually BEAUTIFUL. I was expecting the usual choppily-written story that you skip half of, but this was INCREDIBLE. The plot twists weren't majorly out of character, and I can see this actually happening if Katniss had never been able to volunteer. Please keep writing, because you have a fantastic way with words.
| Claudita chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Oh, my God.
This was incredible. I love your style and how real you write the characters. Gorgeous.
| irmaida chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
That was beautiful and tragic and beautifully tragic and tragically beautiful.
Seeing Prim go through all that... seeing Prim change... seeing the end where Katniss runs away...
It all makes me feel sort of sad/unfulfilled but I understand that things just had to happen this way with everything and wow this is so dark and twisted and *wrong* but you still write the idea so very well and it's just an amazing story.
| I am that Writer chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Wow… That was… whoa; amazing.