Reviews for Rivalry
Kneazle-Chan chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This piece of writing is incredibly beautiful. Seriously, it gave me shudders, and I loved the last sentence. I especially like how you don't use their names, but your description makes it so clear and the imagery was wonderful! Thank you for sharing this as you have sparked my muse.
Freefan1412 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Nice. I like relationships like this. A balance between friendship, respect and rivalry.
kittykittyhunter chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I really enjoyed this story. - I love how you captured the intensity of their rivalry. You used some lovely language. :)
Masamune Uchiha chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
short but i like it!
Monmusu chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Love this story! Such a beautiful tribute to the conflict and friction between the two characters. I love how you described their opposing colors as blending together into magenta instead of being on constant clash.
Sethyl chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Love it! The detail in it was great and you really hit their personalities very well.