Reviews for Chocolate
Dream I Dare chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
please when it's adopted please write another post
Lizscissomcullen chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
No u can't stop with chocolate I need to know who told them the other had died and y please give this one one more chance.
LunaticDriver chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
I want to kill her. I cry wen i read the last paragraph please update!
angieluvzdecullens chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Omg I'm sad to see that inspiration has left don't worry I totally understand sometimes it happens and characters stop talking to us :) yhu need a break and hey its cool as I sai before I'm sad to see these stories go but hope 2 see yhu back someday

_ Angie
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
WHY THE HELL YOU NAME THEIR DAUGHTER BOY NAME. DO YOU WANT THEIR DAUGHTER BE HALF BOY AND HALF GIRL. YOU SHOULD NAME THEIR DAUGHTER NAME CARLIE. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY I DON'T WANT TO TURN TO NUT. IS WAS WEIRD TO READ STORY THAT GIRL HAVE BOY NAME WHEN THEIR ALOT CUTE GIRL NAME YOU CAN CHOICE FOR THEIR DAUGHTER. BUT NO YOU CHOICE UGLY BOY NAME FOR THEIR DAUGHTER.
lilmstran chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 2 . 3/25/2012
omg can i kill tanya? cuz i soooooooooo want to kill her charlie is not her daughter and she never will be her daughter she is bella's daughter

ily!

xD!
Veronique24 chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Didn't see her coming along for the ride...

Can't wait to read how hopefully Bella places Tanya in her place!
x0xalexis8 chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
i cant wait to find out whats going on!
AllisonteamEmmett chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Really good. Update asap!
angieluvzdecullens chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Aww charlie is the sweetest argh stupid Tanya I hate her sooo muuuucchh yhu have no idea how mmuch I hate th bitch like not joke...update soon :) luvin the story
crazy-chick-4life chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Oooooo hell no me dont like tanya I want to kill the person who made the lie I feel it was charlie,renee and tanya I mean u could have it where her parents didn't want her to give up college and life so they thought that it be better this way so they went to tanya knowing she could get edward not to be able to get there in time and have bella nurse be tanya mom and like have her black mail the doctor 4 something that would take his license away love your story cant wait 4 more
deathnoteuser07 chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
for some reason tanya is always the villain. nice story, i like it. very interesting, full of mystery. i wonder who lied to bella and edward but i'm guessing it's tanya.

review my story please?
doooooooor chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
This is a great idea for a story! Please continue!
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
who would want to do that to anyone that is sooooooooooo cruel on many levels

ily!

xD!
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