|Reviews for His Rival|
| teniyume chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
It was a really interesting development, though you posted it as complete. Does that mean there won't be more? I was really hoping to see if they do end up dating or not.
| Rizrielle chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Ooh, I assume Mayu looks similar to Tezuka? As in, brown hair and stuff... Atobe was really in character! A very believable development and at the same time fluffy (somewhat...)
| kuroikuu chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I really liked the end there. ) Atobe was implying to Tezuka, right? The impression I got of Mayu was that of a klutzy girl with a brain. Typical, but not really stereotypical. And Atobe was just being his arrogant self as always. :D