|Reviews for The Shadow of a Ghost|
| girl gamer 24 chapter 12 . 9/25
This story is soo good.
:) :) :) :) loads of smileys for you xD
| Majestic Dreams chapter 12 . 7/21
Please update this story so many people like this story and some people might not like but they are haters and while all of the rest of us love The Shadow of a Ghost and want you to update and to read more of your amazing story. Please update very soon and fast its been a year and 5 months almost 6 months. Please update all of us miss this story
| AshelyOfChaos chapter 12 . 7/21
Its been a over a year please don't make it two years please update this story and q lot of people love this story please don't keep us waiting we want to know what happens. Please update soon
| Nightingale Elite chapter 12 . 7/13
Great job! Be careful with keeping track of information you throw our way. Remember, Woods is 90 in 2025, not in 2016. Also, your information about Shadow is a bit goofy sometimes, nothing major. You sometimes mix it up so just watch out for that.
| katherine chapter 12 . 12/17/2014
Can u please update its been 11 months soon to be 12 can u please update I need to know what is going to happen
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
| Your OC is a Sue chapter 12 . 9/4/2014
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Please, don't update this story ever again. I will flame it here and there, and everywhere!
Your OC, my darling, is a Mary Sue.
| allison chapter 12 . 9/2/2014
Can u update this story soon 7 months please update I miss this story
| OkamiPlayer chapter 12 . 9/1/2014
Please Continue! This is a really funny and action packed story that is super duper cool, and I hope your problems become magical unicorns and rainbows! :D
| Lady Aeries chapter 12 . 7/26/2014
Hello been a fan of this story for ages and suddenly thought of it and reread the entire thing. I know it's been ages but I'd love to see you continue the story if you're still able to :)
| CaptainAshPrice chapter 12 . 7/23/2014
OMG Please write more soon! I was totally hooked on this story!
| Victory chapter 12 . 6/20/2014
Another chapter involving her outside of Task Force 141! Good, you're not making her go back immediately.
If anything, it's actually nice to get to know Genevieve and delay Shadow (and Ghost, etc) for a bit. I got a lot from this, as from the previous chapter. It's cool to learn about her family, and how she is out of the 141.
I don't think the Mother thing was revealed 'in a very shitty manner' - it could have been worse, although it wasn't fantastic either. Yeah, her mom could've been mentioned in one of the first couple chapters, and then in this chapter as it is. At least, you didn't screw up with it as Genevieve mentioned that being involved with the 141 made her forget about her mother, so that's decent.
I'm really liking the character development in this and the last chapter.
And yes! Things will get more intense, Shadow acknowledges this!
You know, what with her being furious with Ghost, his actions and reactions, and the rest of the MW2 storyline - can't wait to see how you write it out, and any changes/additions you'll make! I'm sure sure it will be worth the wait.
| Victory chapter 11 . 6/20/2014
Sorry for not reviewing before. Laziness is to blame.
So yeah, the only Call of Duty stuff I play is Modern Warfare (especially 2) and some other non-BO games, but I do get the entire BO II storyline, so the references in the chapter thankfully managed to not lose me.
I wouldn't have said this had you not mentioned this in your AN, but the development of Prophet's and Shadow's relationship is actually pretty cool. They've become close, but what lies ahead for them? I remember from chapters previous that he was wary of her. Hope that will play into effect in later chapters.
It's good to see some time away from the 141, and see Shadow, or more accurately Genevieve, within her CIA colleagues. Times before I couldn't help but feel like, 'what's she doing in 141 if she's not getting anything', but now, it's a breath of fresh air I guess one would say. The reader can see more of her purpose.
| FlowersForTheDead chapter 12 . 6/11/2014
Awesome keep it going
| Helven chapter 12 . 5/17/2014
I have been reading stories for awhile and I swear if you don't put more chapters in my smiley face will look like this :(