|Reviews for The Shadow of a Ghost|
| Reading Rainbow chapter 9 . 2/27/2017
Wait, in the chapter before this she mentioned being in the marines, in this chapter she stated that she was in the army, like holy crap what were you thinking when you wrote this story
| Reading Rainbow chapter 4 . 2/27/2017
Look, I know that you are no longer writing the story but here's the thing about the marine corp that I will tell you about using Wikipedia, the United States marine corp doesn't have a sergeant first class, they use gunnery sergeant, the army uses sergeant first class. BTW not in military but it mentions it on Wikipedia and the halo wiki (the UNSC use the same ranks as the United States military)
| Victory chapter 13 . 12/19/2015
Oh dear. I just happened to revisit this story today and I saw this!
Not gonna lie, it's greatly disappointing to hear you've abandoned this wonderful and highly enjoyable fanfic, and even more so with the entire COD fandom. Dunno, when you were writing this fic, the passion you had for COD and its characters (as well as Shadow) really shone through. I don't know about your other readers, but it was your love for and willingness to play with these characters (as well as weave some new, intriguing aspects into them!) that got me hooked and stuck onto this fic for so long. But I understand that you may have lost interest in the whole thing. It happens.
And, at least, you didn't /totally/ abandon it.
I'll go check out the continued version. Without a doubt, an entertaining fic such as SoaG doesn't deserve to be left to itself without having some sort of satisfactory conclusion to it. I'm glad you chose to have it continued. Hopefully, the lucky author will do his job well.
Best of luck. :)
P.S. The way you wrote Ghost was just so damn good. And Roach. And MacTavish. And the entire 141 squad. Shadow was great too. I loved being with her through all the scenes you had her in. This whole fic, yo.
(My bad! I keep sounding like SoaG has ended for good! Let me go on to the continued version!)
| BeanieBabyBoi chapter 13 . 11/7/2015
Oh my gosh! You're back! I'm so glad, but I'm a little disappointed that you're not writing COD anymore. Does that mean Road to Revenge is discontinued? :(
| old-cringy-fics chapter 12 . 9/25/2015
This story is soo good.
:) :) :) :) loads of smileys for you xD
| Majestic Dreams chapter 12 . 7/21/2015
Please update this story so many people like this story and some people might not like but they are haters and while all of the rest of us love The Shadow of a Ghost and want you to update and to read more of your amazing story. Please update very soon and fast its been a year and 5 months almost 6 months. Please update all of us miss this story
| AshelyOfChaos chapter 12 . 7/21/2015
Its been a over a year please don't make it two years please update this story and q lot of people love this story please don't keep us waiting we want to know what happens. Please update soon
| Nightingale Elite chapter 12 . 7/13/2015
Great job! Be careful with keeping track of information you throw our way. Remember, Woods is 90 in 2025, not in 2016. Also, your information about Shadow is a bit goofy sometimes, nothing major. You sometimes mix it up so just watch out for that.
| katherine chapter 12 . 12/17/2014
Can u please update its been 11 months soon to be 12 can u please update I need to know what is going to happen
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
| Your OC is a Sue chapter 12 . 9/4/2014
Read the above.
Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue
Please, don't update this story ever again. I will flame it here and there, and everywhere!
Your OC, my darling, is a Mary Sue.
| allison chapter 12 . 9/2/2014
Can u update this story soon 7 months please update I miss this story
| OkamiPlayer chapter 12 . 9/1/2014
Please Continue! This is a really funny and action packed story that is super duper cool, and I hope your problems become magical unicorns and rainbows! :D
| Lady Aeries chapter 12 . 7/26/2014
Hello been a fan of this story for ages and suddenly thought of it and reread the entire thing. I know it's been ages but I'd love to see you continue the story if you're still able to :)
| CaptainAshPrice chapter 12 . 7/23/2014
OMG Please write more soon! I was totally hooked on this story!