Nooooooooo! I have read this before but didn’t remember this ending. My heart is breaking all over again. Daggit!

Well that was unnecessarily cruel...the one thing Ianto wanted so much...I get really irritated by stories that do that to him. Offer something he feels is really good, than rip it away. Was liking the story till this point. :(

Jack can be such a selfish, self-centred, titanic arsehole! No real thought about Ianto from the moment 'move in' was mentioned. No matter what he claims, none of it's about 'sparing' Ianto, it's all about sparing himself and the rest of existence be damned.

I was not expecting to cry! Wow that was a brilliant story, I'm not usually interested in mpreg, but this was really good! I like how John hart really cared for ianto and his baby, and I liked what you added to jack/johns backstory. Ngl, the miscarriage still caught me off guard, despite the warnings! That was really sad :( I also love the ending, how jack finally realised how important ianto is to him etc, I'm so glad that at least their relationship is okay! And poor tosh! :( okay this was really good thank you! :D

I can't stop crying. That was the saddest ending to a story I have ever read. I loved John in this and how caring he was to Ianto. And Jack and Ianto's complicated relationship. I feel bad for Tosh thinking it was her fault and Owen trying to comfort her.

Jack might be an arse. But Ianto is a dumb arse. Yes you need to end it. As long as Jack's getting it easy, why would he want to complicate it? Make him wasn't to advance what you have. Go for it Ianto.

Thankyou. DottyWho. 06.03.0215.

Absolutely amazing story, one of the best I have ever read. It's perfect, beautiful, even if heartbreakingly sad and full of grief and despair. I LOVED the end. I never thought anyone could write not-a-happy-ending and make it so GOOD. I don't even have words to describe how I love the story, how I loved every chapter and every character, this level-headed, mature and assertive Ianto, complicated and stunning Jack, warm and calm and nice John - there were fantastic. I loved the relationship between Jack and Ianto, how well you took them through different stages and tested them in so many different circumstances. I adore this John, he is unpredictable, but he's got a heart in right place. He was amazing in his relations with Ianto.
This story is a masterpiece.

Terrific scene between Jack and Ianto - almost more angst than I could bear. Jack, you're such a fool!

Oh my ! I don't know if I like or hate your fic. I mean the plot is brilliant. Really. But the end. Jack lost one more of his children. John's pain is unbearable for me to watch. So is Ianto's.

I hope you write a sequel.

Nooo! You can't end it there! Please don't end it there! Please? X

Seriously? *That*s where you choose to end it? There? You couldn't have one last chapter of "life goes on"? You are brutal!

Don't get me wrong. The entire story was brilliantly written, and stayed true to the characters. I especially loved the Doctor's reactions to everything! Parent!Janto stories are common, but ones where Ianto carries are hard to find, and they're not always well done. This one was. Bravo on that count!

But did you have to leave off on such a depressing ending? *sniff*

Oh wow! I don't normally read mpregs but I read this one because you wrote it and wow! I cried, no sobbed, at the end. There was just so much to the story... And I feel so speechless. I loved everything about it and the ending was so powerful. All the characters seemed in character and Jack and Ianto angst was just wonderful.

How could you write something like this? An ending like that is not accepted! I freaking love it! *sniff*

So I'm just going to believe that you are writing a sequel to this so I can stop crying...