Reviews for Ideas
Crow667 chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
make it make it make it make it! or if you dont and somoene does take this idea wich i cant cuz i have the self control of a flea an am still stuck in the internet do tell me who took up the story thanks
Ergast chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
In the first snippet, the first time Shiro Takamachi sees Shirou Emiya, he describes him as a red haired one, while later he is whie haired. Also, it seems strange that he is able to distinguish that Shiki is wielding a fruit knife, but he doesn't notice the bandages around his eyes.

About the second one... well, alternative realities tend to fuck with the characters travelling between them, unless they are ready for it.