Reviews for Bachelorette Party
danni chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
this was a great story but it would of made a good 2shot if jasper and edward walked in at the end
BlondeBrainTwin chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
OMG this is amazing and I hope you win you did really well I liked the fact that they took their time and that they acting like it was their first time together instead of it being like so fancy Porno where they don't act curious so amazing job and yay first comment lol!