|Reviews for Until Dawn|
| cwatson23 chapter 22 . 6/13
I REALLY REALLY hope you finish this but its been a hot minute. But if you do decide too I would LOVE IT!
| Littlegraywolf chapter 22 . 6/11
This is a great story so far I look forward to it continuing
| Twilight Demigod chapter 21 . 6/2
| Gajevyaddict chapter 1 . 5/28
Oh please do return to this story. I've been searching for a well written marcus/bella story and I have fallen so much in love with this one. When I clicked I didn't even pay attention to the fact that it's not finished but now I find myself desperate for more. your writing is so absolutely beautiful and I love so much how you portray the Volturi coven. please tell me you are still around and will finish it
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/25
We will never meet, I know. But it is easy for me to see that you have a gift. I see a person of deep st honor in how you described Marcus meeting Bella. We'll done.
| ForrestersWitch chapter 22 . 5/17
I found this beautiful bright Gem of a story and to my dismay did not look to see if it was finished it is the best Marcus /Bella story I have read and I've read over 500 Twi-fiction of Bella/ Jasper or Peter or Caius or Demetri or Alistair or Carlisle Alice Rose... basically anyone but Deadward. So, I think I can safely say this story is Awefuckinsome! That being said Please come back to this I want to know if the man in Florence that reminded Bella of the Vamp that got away is the link to the Romanians I want to see if Jasper and Emmett are reprieved from the rest of the Cullen's. I want to know why the wonder twins aren;t there for they are incapable of letting the rest of the family off their leashes. I want to see the manifestation of Bella's gift... I have heartily enjoyed the relationships she is growing with the rest of the Volturi... I want to see if Jane learns her lesson or if she turns coat to the Romanians there is so much more...
Please Please Please come back to this...Please?
| Vampirequeen05 chapter 22 . 5/4
Omg please update.
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/26
Hi i was wondering if you could continue this story i am in love with it.
| LadySetta chapter 22 . 4/25
Are you going to be unloading anymore chapters? It would be a shame to waste just a good story!
| wolfii chapter 22 . 4/10
Very well written. Enjoyed the story immensely.
Hoping for more )
| LucifersDemonAngel chapter 9 . 3/23
LOL. This is one of my favorite chapters especially when Caius and Athenodora are interrupted. Caius was cock-blocked and acted like a dumb blonde when he misunderstood that Athenodora was concerned about Bella and he thought she meant Jane. It cracks me up every time I read it. I also love this story in general. It's among my all time favorites. Bella and Marcus is one of my favorite pairings. I do hope that you continue updating and finish this story.
| tammgrogan chapter 1 . 3/20
Hello, I'm rereading your story again. I can't fine anything else I want to read right now.
| iloveyou1234 chapter 21 . 3/11
So good, please update!
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/11
Omg love this story!
| JaspersSweetie chapter 22 . 2/28
This is a wonderful, well-written story. I love the way you have portrayed the Volturi, especially Marcus, and I hope you will continue it one day. It would be a shame to simply leave it unfinished like this.