Reviews for Until Dawn
jadeevans30 chapter 16 . 5/21
she's not dead is she
Hpfan23 chapter 22 . 5/18
I really enjoy your story! I really hope the muse ceases to evade you! :-)
Lily chapter 1 . 4/17
Hello Dolphindreamer. I honestly don't know if this counts as a reasonable request that I have to review about it but I was wondering if you could give us a heads-up when you write lemons in your AN. I love your story and I don't want to stop reading it, but I want to avoid reading the lemon in it if possible. It would basically be nice to know where the lemons starts and ends in a chapter. Please consider this. Thank you for reading. ~ Lily
bagherra chapter 22 . 4/16
bonjour,j'espere toujours voir la suite car il serait dommage d'arreter une si belle histoire merci
blinddivinity chapter 22 . 4/8
This is my favorite Twilight fic. One of the reasons why this is my favorite fic is because you go into vampirism and vampire culture and customs. I love it – no other fic does that (and if you know of some, please tell me!). I love your Bella and I love your Marcus. Will Marcus use his gift to figure out who they're loyal to? I'm wondering, does Rose, Emmett or Esme have a power that the Volturi doesn't know about? Could one of them be hiding the memories? Emmett doesn't seem particularly smart, is this an act? I have a feeling that they're working with the Romanians; I can't figure out why - is Carlisle older than we thought? What about Jasper and Alice? Are they being controlled? I can see Alice being manipulative and anti-Bella (I've read a lot of those fics...), but I can't see Jasper being in on it. He was practically a prisoner when he was with Maria, I can't see him voluntarily treating someone badly for the Romanians cause; what on earth would he get out of it? Will Peter and Charlotte be involved in the fic?

I hope you're okay - it's been a while since you last updated.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29
Fallen Angle Girl is stealing this, doing a terrible job of it, but absolutely stealing this, changing POVs and laughably titling it "Justice".
Ana Paula Julio chapter 22 . 3/24
Sorry for my possible mistakes, my english its not that good, I am brazilian ... I am loving this story. Loving so much. Please don't stop, please. I know that Life sometimes sucks, but this... Its precious, you can forget about everything and just dive in the story. Take one day at time, be yourself and be happy! Thales for this story.
Corseted.Pirate chapter 14 . 3/23
I feel the need to respond to your author note:
Finally, I received not to long ago a review pretty much accusing me of writing porn and saying I was being inappropriate for fanfiction. They of course left no way for me to reply to them. I would like to say that if you are not an adult you should not be reading in the M (for MATURE) section of this site. Secondly if you do not like my work, please just do not read it. Thirdly, before you accuse someone of something actually take a look at what they have done. Thus far all sex has taken place behind closed doors and the most explicit happenings have been kissing. Considering some of the things I read this is about as far away from porn as you can get. I do plan on including sex in this later on but if just kissing between two people who care for one another bothers you, please do not read my fanfiction.

My response:
You are absolutely correct that they must not have actually read your work to make that accusation. I'm enjoying this story so much it's offensive to me that people would flame it without bothering to read anything first. I love the character and relationship development combined with gradual thickening of plot that you have going on. I'm so glad that I decided to give this story a chance even though it's been a while since you've updated.
Guest chapter 22 . 3/22
Please update this, I've been dying to know what happens next. Do the Cullins get found out on what they're hiding? Are the Romanians on the horizon? Are the Cullins in volved with the Romainian plot? Are Bella and Marcus going to get even closer? Please please tell us!
tammyleeroberts chapter 18 . 3/15
Will all the cullens be up to no good or will jasper and emmett be in the dark about what's going on
Storystitcher22 chapter 1 . 3/2
I just reread this story, and remembered just how much I enjoyed it! I love the details you created, like the mating instincts and each Volturi characterization!
BattlefieldofDreams chapter 22 . 2/25
I would like more additions to this story
Loki the Brother of Odin chapter 8 . 2/23
MotherFucker it is a magazine ncot clip they don't use those anymore.
LunaShadow chapter 22 . 2/20
Amazing story, and wonderfully written! Thank you! I do hope you'll update eventually!
Melody Rosebane chapter 22 . 2/20
I'm not sure if this story is continuing or has been abandoned, but i just wanted to say that i have loved every moment of it. i recently came across it a few nights ago and have been reading it from beginning every free moment i could. I would love to see more, if possible.
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