Reviews for Vanessa
Remnant chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
I'm so sorry but I got freaked out by this and had to repost it, sorry again

"They hurt her"

About six years ago in Indiana, Carmen Winstead was pushed down a sewer opening by five girls in her school, trying to embarrass her in front of her school during a fire drill. When she didn't submerge, the police were called. They went down and brought up 17-year-old Carmen Winstead's body, with her neck broken from hitting the ladder, then the concrete at the bottom. The girls told everyone she fell... They believed them.

FACT: About two months later, 16-year-old David Gregory read this post and didn't repost it. When he went to take a shower, he heard laughter, started freaking out, and ran to his computer to repost it. He said goodnight to his mom and went to sleep, but five hours later, his mom woke up in the middle of the night from a loud noise and David was gone. A few hours later, the police found him in the sewer, with a broken neck and the skin on his face peeled off.

Even Google her name - you'll find this to be true.

If you don't repost this saying "They hurt her," then Carmen will get you, either from a sewer, the toilet, the shower, or when you go to sleep, you'll wake up in the sewer, in the dark, then Carmen will come and kill you.
Writey Starkid chapter 9 . 6/13/2012
"Who's that dude? And why's he wearing a suit at six in the morning?"


Do Unto Others

Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 22 . 6/3/2012
Was that a fake story used for Hive or for real life?
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 20 . 6/3/2012
what a cool way to end a story.

keep up on life.:)
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 18 . 6/2/2012
good chapter.

write more soon.

-Heavenly Blessing
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 17 . 6/1/2012
Ummm... Thanx for answering my question.:)

So funny.
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 16 . 6/1/2012
I would have slapped overlord for spilling pepsi!
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 15 . 5/21/2012
That was hilarious.

My friend once took out a small bag of skittles from her boot.

It was so funny.

My other friend was like: WTF!

But hey, everyone did it at least once.

I remember pulling out a twizzler bag from my boots on a rainy day.

They were tasty.

Love ya -"
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 14 . 5/13/2012
It's a good story but... It is kinda random and unorganized.

I'm just trying to help.

Love ya;)
Shnizel chapter 7 . 3/25/2012
Shnizel chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
Random but good. :)
Shnizel chapter 5 . 3/22/2012
Another good chapter. :)
Shnizel chapter 4 . 3/21/2012
Keep up the good work. :D
grandmagechina chapter 4 . 3/20/2012
OOC Raven. Oh, thats a good plot bunny...

Stop stealing other characters names!
Shnizel chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
You have an interesting writing style. :D It's great so far. Weird but great. :D
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